Anger Above

The storm approaches
as the sky sheds tears of rage
for God must not be happy..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 7:23 AM
and when He defecates upon the doomed and the demonic i will rejoice knowing that i made the right choice read exodus 14:14,15:3
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September 1, 2010 at 6:40 PM
What an interesting perspective in this one. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen
Bracken Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Wonderful haiku. Great imagery. Thank you for your very kind review to my poem, Shirley
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Wow! a different approach to an oncoming storm.. great haiku luv Wilma
A  Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Lovely, the anger upon the world. God is the blame or answer*luv~SKAT
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:10 PM
I get the same feeling when I see storms coming, Michael. Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:01 PM
Sad to think that God is crying but he has much to cry about for the evil ways of the people everywhere must sadden him..Sara
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