Anger Above

The storm approaches as the sky sheds tears of rage for God must not be happy..

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Date: 9/3/2010 7:23:00 AM

and when He defecates upon the doomed and the demonic i will rejoice knowing that i made the right choice read exodus 14:14,15:3

Date: 9/1/2010 6:40:00 PM

What an interesting perspective in this one. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen

Date: 9/1/2010 2:46:00 PM

Wonderful haiku. Great imagery. Thank you for your very kind review to my poem, Shirley

Date: 9/1/2010 5:08:00 AM

Wow! a different approach to an oncoming storm.. great haiku luv Wilma

Date: 8/31/2010 6:52:00 PM

Lovely, the anger upon the world. God is the blame or answer*luv~SKAT

Date: 8/31/2010 6:10:00 PM

I get the same feeling when I see storms coming, Michael. Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn

Date: 8/31/2010 3:01:00 PM

Sad to think that God is crying but he has much to cry about for the evil ways of the people everywhere must sadden him..Sara