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Anger

A spirit enshrouded in darkness Angry thoughts under his eyelids His soul withering in pain And his conscious fighting in vain Heart once warm and inviting Now ice cold and frightening Rage pure because someone did him wrong Muscles shaking like the ringing of a gong He's focused and his thoughts are clear To somehow entrench the wrongdoer in fear Yet no ones done wrong, their feelings just aren't the same The wrongdoer was a woman, who put his feelings to shame So for a while he's mad at everyone Mad at the earth, and mad at the sun He must go through all the stages of grief Until tears leave his eyes and he finds his release Love is dangerous, not everyone survives The trial by error test, to find Mrs. right You must have the courage, the will to continue on When your heart has been broken and it's beats are not strong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/25/2013 9:55:00 PM
Wonderful poetry here. I like the way you arrange your words, and I love the way it had a softer ending.
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William Hughes
Date: 3/25/2013 10:29:00 PM
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:00:00 PM
I do not ususally get this angry, but sometimes I spout off and end up shaking.You have caught the element of anger by it's tail end.
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William Hughes
Date: 10/4/2012 8:43:00 PM
It was incomplete when you read it but i thank you for your comments and for reading.

Book: Shattered Sighs