Jared Pickett Poet I do not know?

**anger**

This primitive caveman aggression
forms deep inside.
coming from years of anguish
I wish it would subside.
A deep red rose,
becomes the color that I see.
The worlds clarity once my vision.
I'm now a different entity.

Jared Pickett
12/27/09
Asavvy1

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Mac Mcgovern February 20, 2010 at 5:05 PM I have tried to describe inner feelings that arise as bile, but you have managed to express feelings in the most powerful, descriptive verse. Very powerful. Mac

Skat A February 17, 2010 at 10:07 PM ONCE A CAVEMAN ALWAYS A CAVEMAN .... VERY INTRESTING ..I FIGURE THE ROSE IS WHAT CONTROLS THE ANGER. THE ROSE IS A WOMAN... MAYBE NOT...IRMA

Nicole Sharon Brown January 22, 2010 at 5:00 AM Cool write on such an uncool subject!

Robert A. Dufresne January 9, 2010 at 9:50 AM Very well expressed, Jared. Oh how well I've known those first four lines. The only chance I ever had for relief was Prayer. Thank God for that. Thanks for sharing this.-Robert

Doris Culverhouse December 27, 2009 at 9:26 PM I am living withthis monster lately and I am not sure why sometimes, My husband. :) Gotta love him!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 27, 2009 at 6:36 PM Well whats the anger all about ASavvy 1?.. and where have u been hiding?.. your words seem to say all is not too well...did u enjoy your Christmas?.. ready for New Year?.. did u get the Soup Mails?.. talk soon after u finish venting..yes? blessings... luv.. "Sweetheart"

John Freeman December 27, 2009 at 1:20 PM Good job Jared. That evil twin gives us all a hard time, as we must renew his twisted mind, and let love rule from our hearts. How have you been my friend. I hope you have had a wonderful Holiday,and I wish you a grand New Year. Sincerely, Moses. You have mail

Sara Kendrick December 27, 2009 at 1:05 PM Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the the creative pen flowing. Sara