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Anger

this
              poison 
               called 
               anger 
           eats away 
               at the 
                soul;
               if left
          simmering 
      in the cauldron
       of one's heart.
             to calm... 
               down,
         just breathe,
          count to 10,
             and do...
                this
               every 
               time.


Submitted for...
Waltz Wave Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
Date written: 06/10/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Seeker Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:06 PM
And there we have it folks! Anger management made easy! Congrats Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Merryman Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Edward, your waltz wave flowed smoothly and had a wonderful message! I wish you had spelled out the number ten. Congrats on your win in my contest! blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 5:53 PM
Thank you very much for my placement and congrats, Kim:-) I wish I had spelled out ten, too!
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 5:55 PM
such sterling advice in your poem. YES. Congrats too.
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea:-)
Poet Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Edward, you desreve it with this very well penned poem. Blessings and regards
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Always good advice. Sometimes, I need to count to 100, and now always do. ~ gw
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 9:07 PM
Good for you, Gershon!:-) Thanks for dropping by...
Milgate Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 4:35 PM
Good advice and look at what happened to him!!! Have read that anger is really about sadness and worry.
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 9:09 PM
I know, right? lol Thanks for dropping by, Linda!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Hello Edward, arguments get out of control, then the anger comes pouring out. with fits fights happening. Anger should be controlled by doing what you poetry says. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Hello Edward, Sometimes arguments are over things that does not mean anything at all important. blessing s my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 11:16 AM
I couldn't agree more, Darlene:-) Thanks for visiting my poem, my friend.
Hankins Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Super thoughts on anger. Best wishes in the contest. This is a fine entry!
Ibeh Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Awesome entry for contest. Many would benefit. All the best for contest
Ibeh Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Thank you, Rama:-) Most appreciated.
Boreham Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Anger is most certainly a poison and contagious, Good Luck in the comp Edward
Ibeh Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Yep, definitely contagious as well! Thank you for the wonderful visit and feedback, Paris-Maree:-)
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