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Angels when I lie to sleep thoughts of angels in heaven flicker in my dreams holding hands we fly above the clouds to great heights surveying dear lives my subconscious gets embedded with their whispers to elongate hands when eyelids open the winds push me to salt lakes to saturate tears my divine angels usher in empathy by opening shut doors April 9, 2016 For Marvin Celestial

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Date: 4/12/2016 9:05:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Balveen, on your wonderful First Place win in the "Angels" contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/22/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 4/12/2016 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations Balveen
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Nayda!
Date: 4/12/2016 5:11:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Balveen :)
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 4/12/2016 3:41:00 PM
What a lovely angelic poem, Balveen! A merited first placed winner! Congratulations. // paul
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Paul!
Date: 4/12/2016 1:53:00 PM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations for your 1st place win in the contest. I Love your imagery in this piece. I followed your dream from beginning to end and the words brought me Joy. A definite sevem....Mike.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/22/2016 12:50:00 PM
Mike, thanks so much!
Date: 4/12/2016 10:37:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/12/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Devnath!
Date: 4/12/2016 9:35:00 AM
Wow!! Agreat description of your vision and how you felt. Congratulations on your win!! :-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/12/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 4/12/2016 9:25:00 AM
Congrats Balveen....
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/12/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 4/12/2016 8:12:00 AM
Belveen...Beautiful senyru, congrats on your top placement! -luloo :)
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Date: 4/12/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 4/12/2016 7:17:00 AM
Hi Balveen. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/12/2016 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Teddy! It's a welcome change!
Date: 4/12/2016 6:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2016 6:51:00 AM
Hugs & Thanks Jan!
Date: 4/12/2016 2:11:00 AM
Congrats Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/12/2016 3:05:00 AM
Thanks Rob!
Date: 4/12/2016 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations on a terrific win Balveen, great work....
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Date: 4/12/2016 3:07:00 AM
Glad you thought it terrific, Charlie! Thanks!
Date: 4/12/2016 12:49:00 AM
Balveen, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 4/11/2016 10:07:00 PM
Congratz! The angels are always with you....
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/11/2016 10:35:00 PM
Unbelievably true! Thanks for one of the most beautiful compliments-'The angels are always with you'!
Date: 4/11/2016 6:03:00 PM
Lovely imagery and sentiments, Balveen. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/11/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 4/9/2016 12:09:00 PM
Balveen, this is a wonderful poem for the contest..good luck!-luloo
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Date: 4/10/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Luloo!
Date: 4/9/2016 6:33:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Balveen good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/10/2016 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Jan!

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