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Angels

Angels



                                                   when I lie to sleep
                                          thoughts of angels in heaven
                                                   flicker in my dreams

                                                   holding hands we fly
                                        above the clouds to great heights
                                                    surveying dear lives

                                                   my subconscious gets
                                            embedded with their whispers 
                                                      to elongate hands

                                                      when eyelids open
                                            the winds push me to salt lakes  
                                                        to saturate tears

                                                        my divine angels
                                                     usher in empathy by
                                                      opening shut doors



                                                           April 9, 2016
                                                    For Marvin Celestial

Copyright © Balveen Cheema | Year Posted 2016

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Sandra Haight Date: 4/12/2016 9:05:00 PM Back to congratulate you, Balveen, on your wonderful First Place win in the "Angels" contest! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/22/2016 12:53:00 PM Thanks Sandra!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 4/12/2016 5:36:00 PM Congratulations Balveen Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/22/2016 12:51:00 PM Thanks Nayda!

Laura Leiser Date: 4/12/2016 5:11:00 PM Congrats on your top win, Balveen :) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/22/2016 12:52:00 PM Thanks Laura!

Paul Callus Date: 4/12/2016 3:41:00 PM What a lovely angelic poem, Balveen! A merited first placed winner! Congratulations. // paul Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/22/2016 12:53:00 PM Thanks Paul!

Vladislav Raven Date: 4/12/2016 1:53:00 PM Hi Balveen, Congratulations for your 1st place win in the contest. I Love your imagery in this piece. I followed your dream from beginning to end and the words brought me Joy. A definite sevem....Mike. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/22/2016 12:50:00 PM Mike, thanks so much!

Bl Devnath Date: 4/12/2016 10:37:00 AM Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 10:44:00 AM Thanks Devnath!

Eve Roper Date: 4/12/2016 9:35:00 AM Wow!! Agreat description of your vision and how you felt. Congratulations on your win!! :-) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 9:37:00 AM Thanks Eve!

Probir Gupta Date: 4/12/2016 9:25:00 AM Congrats Balveen.... Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 9:27:00 AM Thanks!

Beautiful Scars Date: 4/12/2016 8:12:00 AM Belveen...Beautiful senyru, congrats on your top placement! -luloo :) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 8:13:00 AM Thanks Laura!

Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/12/2016 7:17:00 AM Hi Balveen. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 7:18:00 AM Thanks Teddy! It's a welcome change!

Jan Allison Date: 4/12/2016 6:41:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 6:51:00 AM Hugs & Thanks Jan!

Rob Carmack Date: 4/12/2016 2:11:00 AM Congrats Balveen. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 3:05:00 AM Thanks Rob!

Charlie Smith Date: 4/12/2016 1:11:00 AM Congratulations on a terrific win Balveen, great work.... Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 3:07:00 AM Glad you thought it terrific, Charlie! Thanks!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/12/2016 12:49:00 AM Balveen, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/12/2016 3:07:00 AM Thanks Linda!

Marvin G. Celestial Date: 4/11/2016 10:07:00 PM Congratz! The angels are always with you.... Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/11/2016 10:35:00 PM Unbelievably true! Thanks for one of the most beautiful compliments-'The angels are always with you'!

Sandra Haight Date: 4/11/2016 6:03:00 PM Lovely imagery and sentiments, Balveen. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/11/2016 9:17:00 PM Thanks Sandra!

Beautiful Scars Date: 4/9/2016 12:09:00 PM Balveen, this is a wonderful poem for the contest..good luck!-luloo Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/10/2016 1:35:00 PM Thanks Luloo!

Jan Allison Date: 4/9/2016 6:33:00 AM Beautiful imagery Balveen good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/10/2016 1:36:00 PM Thanks Jan!