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Angels

sing ye seraphim

God’s warriors and servants

lifeblood’s beacon


unseen blessings poured

wings spread, keeping us from harm

with love  -  beaming eyes



suffering heart prays

for strength and serenity

down on  bended knee


will always treasure

white silken plumes gentles touch

take upon oneself


4/7/2016

 



- Poetry Contest:   
 Laura loo

My life has been blessed with their wings spread wide  at my side with their prayers.

angelsenryu

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Jan Allison

July 15, 2016 at 12:37 PM

Many many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Sarita Milliner

July 15, 2016 at 11:27 AM

Congratulations Eve on your 1st place win.

Beautiful Scars

July 15, 2016 at 11:26 AM

Oh Eve, how beautiful is this senryu! one of my fav forms too! It caught my heart right away lady! congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Manmath Dalei

May 1, 2016 at 11:34 PM

Eve, I love poems on angels. Here u did a outstanding job. Flow is very sweet & smooth from start to end. Congratulations on ur win. Feel glad to read.........hugs

Vladislav Raven

April 14, 2016 at 3:33 PM

Hi Eve, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent and most beautiful write from your pen. The gentleness of the words and the imagery expressed make this a winner. What gentle undertones make this write sing in its peace. This is definitely a top rating, a seven.

Eve Roper

April 15, 2016 at 12:26 PM

Thank you so very much, Mike, I have really tried to grow since I started to write. I am developing a love for poetry and creating it like I do my canvas. It always feels so nourished when people like you genuinely gives me a complement. I Thank You again. Hugs Eve

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

April 12, 2016 at 5:45 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve

Andrea Dietrich

April 12, 2016 at 5:32 PM

congrats for the win with your angel poems. I will look for Saviing grace. ISn't that what you said? If you don't see a comment coming, it means I could not find it. I have to hurry and finish here in five minutes!

Laura Leiser

April 12, 2016 at 5:24 PM

Lovely and descriptive senryus, Eve! Congrats on your fine win :)

Paul Callus

April 12, 2016 at 4:25 PM

What a lovely string of senryu, Eve! I hope your guardian angels will always keep you company! ~ Congratulations on this worthy win! ~ Regards & hugs // paul