Angels

Angels (Senryu Contest)




                                     Send me an Angel...
                              "Dear boy I am always here"
                                     Louder sing louder...

                                      Send me an Angel!!!
                           "Rest now while I take your fears"
                                      This is how we talk

                                       Me and my Angel
                                "My dearest child and me"
                                         Love eternity


                                           04/05/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Michaels Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely piece. Regards, John.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Congratulations Brian
Davey Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thank you so much
Devnath  Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Davey Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thank you BL I appreciate it very much
Scars Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:37 AM
wow Brian! SOOOO beautifully penned..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Thank you so much Laura
A   Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 1:10 AM
Brian, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA
Davey Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Thank you Linda
Hicks Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Touching senryu for the little angel in your life, Brian. A language only known between a father and a son. I like it!
Davey Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 12:47 AM
thank you
Callus Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 7:41 AM
I like the relationship between you and the angel/s, Brian! It's god to know that they are never far away! // paul
Davey Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 2:54 PM
thank you Paul and yes you have no idea how reassuring it is to have mine close by, overworked that he is! ha ha
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:42 PM
sweet set of senryu, Brian. Nice ones for me to see tonight.
Davey Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 2:53 PM
thank you Andrea peaceful reads are always good at night before bed
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:25 AM
very touching Brian - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Davey Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Thank you Jan
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