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Angelic Assist

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light within the raging storm 
another grain at cascade's end 
a grasp when stumbling 
press when crumbling 
no needle, thread, but still the mend 
a drop when drought has sunk all hope 
and happiness has turned away 
a bucket for tears 
a reprieve from fears 
a home to return to when led astray

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Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 11:32 AM A lovely write. I have heard each tear is counted. It will go against the person who caused it. Guess in heaven we will find out. Have a wonderful/blessed day................... Hello There January 20, 2023 at 10:21 PM Thank you, Paula. Have a wonderful day : )

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2019 at 5:18 PM the ending ties this up all very well. A home to return to when led astray. Very nicely written poem. Hello There September 26, 2019 at 6:34 PM Thank you so much, Andrea :)

Winged Warrior September 26, 2019 at 7:46 AM We get that assistance whether we know it or not...sometimes I notice...there are many signs...lovely verse HT...^WW^ :o) Hello There September 26, 2019 at 1:54 PM Thank you, ^WW^. I never used to know this, but then there came to be no other explanation... Thank you ~

Sandra Adams September 25, 2019 at 4:37 PM we all need mending and that ray of hope to help us in the darker times...sometimes i think the tears need a pool or something to catch them though... great poem! hugs :) Hello There September 25, 2019 at 5:08 PM I had a dream once, but never wrote about it... about tears being caught, in a bottle of sorts. Funny you chose those words... Thank you, Sandra (hugs)

Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:17 AM I liked the angelic tone in your poem and in these verses, HT:no needle, thread, but still the mend a drop when drought has sunk all hope ...a bucket for tears a reprieve from fears. Hello There September 25, 2019 at 10:18 AM :) Thank you, Vijay ~ thank you for sharing this with me <3

Regina Mcintosh September 25, 2019 at 7:42 AM Enjoyed reading your poem... lovely. God bless you Hello There September 25, 2019 at 10:15 AM Thank you, Regina. Blessings to you, too ~

Chris Green September 24, 2019 at 5:42 PM Absolutely beautiful and enchanting. Your words are soft and comforting this evening. Really nicely done my friend. Hello There September 24, 2019 at 6:30 PM Thank you, Chris ~ I'm so glad you liked this :)

Heidi Sands September 24, 2019 at 5:19 PM Very nice. I can feel a comforting Angel nearby :) Hello There September 24, 2019 at 6:29 PM Aw, I'm glad, Heidi ~ thank you :)