Alana Tye Poet Rhyme

Angelfire

Hair dark as raven wings
sweet-venom kiss...the soul it stings
Pale blue eyes that cast a spell
look long enough...your soul will sell
Voice gentle as nature's breeze
soft whisper...your on your knees
Long sheer white, she wears to dance
hypnotized...you can't break glance
She is an angel with a touch of fire
mind of innocence...heart's desire

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Joanna Smith February 22, 2010 at 11:58 AM wpow i really loved this one it was darkly beautiful! It was very very good poem i loved the line shes an angel with a touch of fire great write here! =)Jo

The Melody Sings February 22, 2010 at 10:55 AM Great imagery and wonderful expression in this one. ~Brittany

Jay Loveless February 22, 2010 at 10:33 AM captivating, like witches spell, the white fire burns, with thirst you cant dis-spell, a dance of pure beneath moon light, a grace of ritual by fires side...beautiful my friend. so glad serenity suggested you to me. .:Rain:.

Michael Degenhardt January 16, 2009 at 11:51 AM Love this! So remonatic and simply beautiful! The flow is great while your words so well paint the images you intend. Michael

Vince Suzadail Jr. January 12, 2009 at 6:17 PM It's a man's world. Yeah! Right. One smile and the poor guy goes to jelly. Nice to see you back. Vince

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2009 at 4:34 PM Hey Alana, You have couplets there! Very different imagery for an angle but Michael was an angle aye and a warrior angle at that. Nice write. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Phyllis Babcock January 11, 2009 at 1:53 PM A beautiful piece Alana with great imagery. God Bless Phyl

Sharon Winter January 11, 2009 at 5:37 AM Alana, you have not lost your poetic talent one bit! Gorgeous imagery, a beautiful angel with human desires. Love the title too! Awesome write! Love, Shar xoxo

Kristin Reynolds January 11, 2009 at 3:45 AM Beautiful imagry, she sounds like a naughty girl! lol love, Kristin

Brian Strand January 11, 2009 at 12:42 AM Beautiful words Lana.Welcome back.Rgds Brian

Steve Voorhees January 10, 2009 at 10:09 PM Alane...you saw that she devil in my mind too? = ) great poem! Much love, Steve

Keith Bickerstaffe January 10, 2009 at 3:26 PM Sweet rhyming and flow... and exceptional imagery. Well done Alana! Best wishes, Keith