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Angelfire

Hair dark as raven wings sweet-venom kiss...the soul it stings Pale blue eyes that cast a spell look long enough...your soul will sell Voice gentle as nature's breeze soft whisper...your on your knees Long sheer white, she wears to dance hypnotized...you can't break glance She is an angel with a touch of fire mind of innocence...heart's desire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/22/2010 11:58:00 AM
wpow i really loved this one it was darkly beautiful! It was very very good poem i loved the line shes an angel with a touch of fire great write here! =)Jo
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:55:00 AM
Great imagery and wonderful expression in this one. ~Brittany
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:33:00 AM
captivating, like witches spell, the white fire burns, with thirst you cant dis-spell, a dance of pure beneath moon light, a grace of ritual by fires side...beautiful my friend. so glad serenity suggested you to me. .:Rain:.
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Date: 1/16/2009 11:51:00 AM
Love this! So remonatic and simply beautiful! The flow is great while your words so well paint the images you intend. Michael
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Date: 1/12/2009 6:17:00 PM
It's a man's world. Yeah! Right. One smile and the poor guy goes to jelly. Nice to see you back. Vince
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Date: 1/11/2009 4:34:00 PM
Hey Alana, You have couplets there! Very different imagery for an angle but Michael was an angle aye and a warrior angle at that. Nice write. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:53:00 PM
A beautiful piece Alana with great imagery. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/11/2009 5:37:00 AM
Alana, you have not lost your poetic talent one bit! Gorgeous imagery, a beautiful angel with human desires. Love the title too! Awesome write! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 1/11/2009 3:45:00 AM
Beautiful imagry, she sounds like a naughty girl! lol love, Kristin
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Date: 1/11/2009 12:42:00 AM
Beautiful words Lana.Welcome back.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2009 10:09:00 PM
Alane...you saw that she devil in my mind too? = ) great poem! Much love, Steve
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Date: 1/10/2009 3:26:00 PM
Sweet rhyming and flow... and exceptional imagery. Well done Alana! Best wishes, Keith
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