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Angel Wings

- Angel Wings -

@                                                          @
                 Beautiful                                              Beautiful
                  angel wings                                    angel wings
                   bright blue sky                             bright blue sky
                       ((  Weak tones                       Weak tones  ))
                          of harp music                   of harp music
                       which flows from                which flows from
                   an unknown location             an unknown location
   Raised by an adventurous mood           Raised by an adventurous mood
                             from strength           from strength 
                  ((           to weakness          to weakness            ))
                     The pursuit of truth          The pursuit of truth
        through earth realm century           through earth realm century
     White stones glow in the dark             White stones glow in the dark
                 majestic and worthy                 majestic and worthy
                    ((     It's magical                    It's magical    ))
                     Infinite beauty                        Infinite beauty
                        peace of mind                   peace of mind  
                               and humor              and humor
                                  Death                         Death
                                       with                     with  
                            ((  confidence                 confidence  ))
                                      Heaven              Heaven
                                            can             can 
                                                    wait
                                                      @











==(__SHAPE POEM CONTEST______)==
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            |14.11.2018
           |   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)        
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==(____Sponsored by: Eve Roper___)==

             ~    2nd place in the contest  ~


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Bangalee Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 11:42 PM
Just WOW! I have no word to express myself regarding this poem
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 2:19 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Mahtab :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Oh my goodness this is beautiful, you win hand down for me, your in a league all of your own her today dear Sunshine. Sending you angel kisses . xo and oh congrats !!!!
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 5:31 AM
- I remember there was a lot of work with this poem ... to shape it :) - Glad you liked it, Pixie :) - Thank you very much, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations Anne- Lise on your win, Your wings are amazing !!!
Andresen Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:10 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Lovely, Sunshine. I read it across like an echo. So delightful. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:05 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Agustin Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:28 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 6:35 PM
I adored this one Anne-lise, it was my fave of the ones i read!!:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:30 PM
- So glad you liked my wings ... many thanks, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 3:04 PM
I'm sorry I missed this earlier, Sunshine. Your gift takes wing in this poem! Congratulations on your win in the shape contest! Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:28 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Sunshine. I thank you for entering my contest Shapes. You bring to the conscious mind the inspiration what God has blessed us with, but yes Heaven can wait a little longer. Your canvas of words flow so well. Jan said it correctly, "It's Stunning". Hugs Eve ~`*
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 4:15 PM
- Glad you liked it, Eve ... many thanks for my place on your winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 4:30 PM
what can I say other than stunning!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:37 PM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dutta Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 9:36 AM
EXCELLENT.
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 10:48 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 3:42 PM
This is so beautiful, and I am wondering if you wrote yours today also? I am discovering a little pattern that some days two or three of us have the same kinds of poems. This is GORGEOUS! The words, the pattern, and the everything of it, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 3:49 PM
- I posted it on Wednesday, Caren ... so glad you liked it :) - (A lot of work :) - Many thanks for lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, an amazing peace, your beautiful wings painting an angel's wings. This reads like a winner Anne-Lise. So incredibly creative. Good luck in the contest. This is an amazing fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 11:58 AM
- So glad you liked my wings, Mike :) - Many thanks for lovely comment and the amazing fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Reads like a good contender. Enjoyed reading your creation. Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 11:56 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 8:33 PM
wow, I'm with nette. Incredible job!
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 2:06 AM
- Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 1:02 PM
incredible, anne... i see a winner here, dear angel... happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 2:05 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 12:34 PM
This is a stunning piece, Anne-Lise! I hope to see it high on the winners' list!! All the best, John.
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 2:04 AM
- Many thanks for your comment and visit, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Never have seen more beautiful wings carrying such a beautiful message my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Bravo!
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 6:04 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Demetrios :) - Glad you liked my wings :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Oh Anne Lise this is wonderful!!!!
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:41 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Just beautiful
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:40 AM
- Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Amazing perfection. I have no words for this creative piece other then Bravo !
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:39 AM
- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:25 PM
This is so so beautiful, Anne-Lise..amazing creativity..a wonderful message as well..a winning poem.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:12 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Wow, that was so cool my friend. You did a fabulous job with this beautiful poem. I don't know how anything could top this in the contest. Really nice.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:10 AM
- So kind comment, Chris ... many thanks - I've never topped any Contest here on soup ... it's not going to happen any miracle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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