Angel Visits - 2-

Angel Visits (2)

(1)

Rosebud pink dancers endome apricot flushed sky,
Arc'd feathering wingtips exult cirrus high,
Love's pleasured shades delight this thank full eye.

Fright held burden, released in healing long,
Freed heart sings anew, childhood's lost song.

Fierce joy streamers swirl, angels light this temple day.
Blossom hued fliers frolic in gladdest play,
Applaud a soul bravely facing acts hard to say.


(2)

We roast beneath violent radiation storm,

                  then above, though between,

draped arms outstretched, elegant graceful form

                 can be seen!

Sun's power becomes pastel rainbow streams,

                 clouds are called

Iridescent halo's, charge electric blue beams

                 we stand entralled

Our savior solar sylph!



Written 15 August 2018
For Emile Pinet Contest;  New Rhyming poem on Angels.

Both true instances. However, the last image was captured on film.  It has been enlarged and forms a focal point in main home area - reminding me of how close our other dimensional help always is.  Now uploaded as my avatar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Such lovely imagery you present to share your Angel visits, Virginia! Very inspiring! Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Waters Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:18 PM
thanks Sandra - wanted to give hope and inspire too.
Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Inspirational and beautiful! Amazing events of faith.
Waters Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Thanks Susan - even more amazing in reality - words really cannot capture these moments fully. My avatar now is the image of the 2nd verse.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations, Virginia. This is a beautiful missive, and a tribute felt in heaven, I am sure.
Waters Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:49 AM
For sure - gratitude is one of the three ascension attitudes - incredibly powerful. Unlocks so many miracles.
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Congrats on your top win, Virginia. Well done.
Waters Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:48 AM
thanks Line
Gondolf Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Such ethereal visions, Virginia, thank you for sharing. Congrats on your win. John
Waters Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:48 AM
thanks John - I feel we all can share more - to counteract the gloomy media mutterings.
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 5:11 PM
So ethereal, so cosmic, Virginia! A wonderful entry for the contest! :) gw
Waters Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 8:24 PM
All real but subject really wanted free verse - so think will eventually rewrite. Didn't place in contest - so should have just gone with first version.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace