Angel Suicide

Pure white skin 
an angel of beauty she was
until one lonely night 
she found the courage to take her own life
no one knew why 
she took her own life
so much life 
so much potential
no one knew why 
now the blood is her tear drops
that she so secretly cried
too much pressure
to be beautiful
to be kind 
to be smart
no one knew 
that secretly she wanted to die
they didn't even noticed when she cried
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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January 29, 2009 at 5:01 PM
"they didn't even noticed when she cried" excellent final line! Foolish person though to let such a precious gift go. Life. Light & Love Debbie
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