Angel of Mundane

Little lost angels fell into urban slums
Walk aimlessly with nothing, but her broken wings
She morphs herself into a granules of dust
Intangible like a vagabond and chooses to be unseen

Escaped from infinite world, she paved her own paradise
Falling and fused with the mundane, she breaks her own dream
As soon as the shield broke, her purity shone from the filthy damn cloak
The hidden sanctity shines, illuminated the dark souls

She chose the knotty part of life
Scars were the last witness to seal her true story
Somehow she relieved
Somehow it changed her destiny

Tracing every stitch on her flawed wings
Slums and filth open the other side, her humanity
She was meant to be an angel
An angel among the damned

Awakened from the slums, her wings were torn
The shield of vagabond was cracked
She paid the price in mortality
To be human, her last destiny
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Komala Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:06 AM
hi hi hi my sweet girl Yanny..Happy Easter dearest one <3 much luv and lights... just stopping to enjoy your fabulous writes <3 :) Sk
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March 31, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Happy Easter too dear Sukmawati :D hug, yanny
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March 25, 2013 at 5:24 AM
Just say hi and....- Have a beautiful Easter, Yanny! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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March 31, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Happy Easter too for you dear Anne :D hug, yanny
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March 23, 2013 at 6:38 PM
I give you a 7 on this one and it will be on my favs. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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March 31, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Luci :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
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March 22, 2013 at 8:01 AM
WONDERFUL!!! You have the gift of poetry in you... hugs Michael
Widjanarko Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Hello Mike :D your words are really bringing me a new spirit! :D glad to have a visit by you Michael :D hug back :D
Dom Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Keep going Yanny. Cheers!
Widjanarko Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Mike, you make my day! :D hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Soupmail
Lamoureux Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 8:44 AM
Good night Yanny, I hope you had a wonderful day.
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Yanny, this is stunning. Very well done. Donna
Widjanarko Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:16 PM
Thank you Donna, really a pleasure to have such an uplifting words from you :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Horsman Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 5:29 PM
truly a wonderful poem..
Widjanarko Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:11 PM
Thank you Harry, wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 6:38 AM
- Yanny, this is absolutely gorgeous!! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Thank you Anne, glad to have a comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 12:42 AM
I enjoyed it very much Yanny. Well done and very awe inspiring. Have a wonderful day as I head off to the land of dreams.
Widjanarko Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:00 PM
Glad that you like it Rick :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D and thank you for checking up my poem :D hug, Yanny
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 12:24 AM
wow, this is so much better as prose, sweetie. I love what you did with it!!! You made it into a very understandable story and to be a human as her destiny is now a clear theme to me. She kind of reminds me of the earthly Mother Teresa!!
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March 17, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Andrea, you are really a wonderful teacher :D hug, yanny
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