Angel of Mundane

Little lost angels fell into urban slums
Walk aimlessly with nothing, but her broken wings
She morphs herself into a granules of dust
Intangible like a vagabond and chooses to be unseen

Escaped from infinite world, she paved her own paradise
Falling and fused with the mundane, she breaks her own dream
As soon as the shield broke, her purity shone from the filthy damn cloak
The hidden sanctity shines, illuminated the dark souls

She chose the knotty part of life
Scars were the last witness to seal her true story
Somehow she relieved
Somehow it changed her destiny

Tracing every stitch on her flawed wings
Slums and filth open the other side, her humanity
She was meant to be an angel
An angel among the damned

Awakened from the slums, her wings were torn
The shield of vagabond was cracked
She paid the price in mortality
To be human, her last destiny
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/31/2013 8:06:00 AM
hi hi hi my sweet girl Yanny..Happy Easter dearest one <3 much luv and lights... just stopping to enjoy your fabulous writes <3 :) Sk
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:24:00 AM
Happy Easter too dear Sukmawati :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/25/2013 5:24:00 AM
Just say hi and....- Have a beautiful Easter, Yanny! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:24:00 AM
Happy Easter too for you dear Anne :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/23/2013 6:38:00 PM
I give you a 7 on this one and it will be on my favs. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Luci :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/22/2013 8:01:00 AM
WONDERFUL!!! You have the gift of poetry in you... hugs Michael
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Date: 3/22/2013 8:07:00 AM
Hello Mike :D your words are really bringing me a new spirit! :D glad to have a visit by you Michael :D hug back :D
Date: 3/21/2013 7:52:00 AM
Keep going Yanny. Cheers!
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Date: 3/22/2013 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Mike, you make my day! :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
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Date: 3/18/2013 8:44:00 AM
Good night Yanny, I hope you had a wonderful day.
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Date: 3/17/2013 9:36:00 PM
Yanny, this is stunning. Very well done. Donna
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Donna, really a pleasure to have such an uplifting words from you :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
truly a wonderful poem..
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:11:00 PM
Thank you Harry, wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/17/2013 6:38:00 AM
- Yanny, this is absolutely gorgeous!! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:09:00 PM
Thank you Anne, glad to have a comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/17/2013 12:42:00 AM
I enjoyed it very much Yanny. Well done and very awe inspiring. Have a wonderful day as I head off to the land of dreams.
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:00:00 PM
Glad that you like it Rick :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D and thank you for checking up my poem :D hug, Yanny
Date: 3/17/2013 12:24:00 AM
wow, this is so much better as prose, sweetie. I love what you did with it!!! You made it into a very understandable story and to be a human as her destiny is now a clear theme to me. She kind of reminds me of the earthly Mother Teresa!!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/17/2013 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, you are really a wonderful teacher :D hug, yanny
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