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Premiere Contest WinnerAngel Love and Direction


God's most beautiful guardian angels come down,
they descend from the heavens, each one in white gown;
with their spirit, they guide me...my heart, soul, and mind.

These sweet, gentle white angels embrace me; I find
I can see them but often are blurs undefined;
angels lead me, are with me through my every day.

I can see them in beauty of life's sweet ballet
every new day unfolds with its bright morning ray
until nighttime delivers dark sky, stars, and Moon.

I can feel them nearby when I'm writing, commune
with their spirit, my deep thoughts instinctively tune
in their river of insights where artistry streams.

And wherever I am, within night or daydreams,
inspiration flows from them in glorious beams
glowing warm, kindling bright for my choices to see.

God's most beautiful creatures of angels help me;
both when seen and when hidden they fly, guarantee 
angel love and direction...sunup till sundown.

With their spirit, they guide me...my heart, soul, and mind.
Angels lead me, are with me through my every day
until nighttime delivers dark sky, stars, and Moon.
In their river of insights where artistry streams,
glowing warm, kindling bright for my choices to see,
angel love and direction...sunup till sundown.


Sandra M. Haight

~First Place~
Premiere Contest: Crown Of Couplets
Sponsor: Catie Lindsay
Judged: 07/30/2016

Anapestic Tetrameter 
12 syllables and 4 feet per line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Thirtyseven Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on the win. A fabulous poem.
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Sandra:)
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Lovely win Sandra, congratulations...
Scars Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Sandra, just beautiful lady:) I really enjoyed this contest and it looks like you did you! Congrats on your wonderful win! :)-luloo
Inman Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Sandra, the flow of your write is exceptional for the form. I found it very difficult to create a smooth flow with the third none rhyming line. Well done and very inspirational.
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thank you very much, James. It was a challenge, as know, and your poem was amazing. I appreciate your supportive comments and congrats! Sandra
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Beautiful and uplifting poem Sandra many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. I am pleasantly surprise and so pleased! Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 3:19 AM
This was beautiful, Sandra:) A#7 for this angelic write:)
Haight Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate your lovely comment and the 7 rating! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Sandra, great write good luck in the contest. Hugs
Haight Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Although I have never seen them, they visit me in my dreams as I sleep. Very lovely as usual. A very comforting thought Mrs Sandra. Good luck in contest.
Haight Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your uplifting comments and good luck wishes for the contest. I appreciate it very much. Sandra
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