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Angel In Your Eyes Contest Entry

Painful Angles; Hope gets strangled
New fangled fears forever dangled
Entangled dreams are mostly mangled
Demons wrestled then wearily wrangled

StrAngels chAngeled,
My sweet CocAinegeles!
Those cunning exchAngeles
Outlawed derAngeles...

Oh, ye kind Angels, give me Peace-
From your embrace, never released
Envelope me, and do not cease
Wrap me in your Golden Fleece!

Let me taste your silver blood,
And in my Heart, a joyous flood
Sprouting wings, a Soul to spring,
Like a flower to its bud

*Angel in Your Eyes Contest Entry
Author: JustThatArchaicPoet
 
(I know this is a really weird piece, but I wanted some form "angel" in a lot of the verses, even if it's a word like "Angle". I guess it's more experimental than anything and probably not what you're looking for.)

Copyright © Just That Archaic Poet | Year Posted 2013

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Debbie Duncan Date: 10/29/2013 11:45:00 PM Well this is a nice " different" piece, I bet it could be a winner ;} Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/30/2013 4:59:00 AM I doubt it, Debbie, but thanks for the encouragement; I appreciate it :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 10/10/2013 11:10:00 PM Interesting, a unique take for sure, but not at all weird! I enjoyed the play on words and the last stanza is quite beautiful...best wishes in the contest. Love and blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/11/2013 7:24:00 AM Thanks so much, Rhonda; much appreciated :)

Robin Davis Date: 10/10/2013 7:22:00 PM Archaic This is a unique and interesting write. Good luck in the contest with this piece. I also entered. Hugs Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/11/2013 7:26:00 AM Thank you, Robin! Best of luck to you as well! ;)