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Angel In My Eyes

Time seems to drag on and on when you want it to go slow but now its moving way to fast because i might have to let you go You've been here all my life it seems everyday by and by so it shouldn't be too confusing that losing you could make me cry Please don't leave me mommy stay with me please stay don't let it be the C word mom you cannot go away I cannot lose someone like you someone who's always been there and the thought of you lying there so cold mom it's just not fair That thing that scares us will be nothing let's just wait and see because there's one thing god won't do and that's take you from me

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Date: 11/7/2013 10:32:00 PM
Anne, , lovely impressive win................ SKAT :)
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Anne Hessler
Date: 11/8/2013 6:08:00 AM
thank you
Date: 11/6/2013 1:59:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- ANNE --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA
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Anne Hessler
Date: 11/7/2013 9:34:00 AM
I hope to read your blog. Thanks for considering my poem. It really means allot to me.
Date: 10/25/2013 10:14:00 AM
Good news came from this the doctor thinks it's just an infection and has given her some meds for it
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Date: 10/22/2013 5:33:00 AM
Scars may remain where memories are intended but God will comfort you when her life has ended....... Poignant writing.... Jake
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Anne Hessler
Date: 10/22/2013 9:53:00 AM
i just hope her life doesn't end for long time i'm still young and so i still need her
Date: 10/21/2013 2:30:00 PM
À written one and a warm welcome to you to poetrysoup. Here. You meet a lot of good people that will help inspire you. Love and hugs!
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Anne Hessler
Date: 10/25/2013 10:12:00 AM
thank you i look forward to reading everyones' poetry
Date: 10/21/2013 10:19:00 AM
Anne, this is a very nice poem... sad, sad emotions. Strong ending.... always~ LINDA
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Anne Hessler
Date: 10/25/2013 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda i enjoy your comments on my writing

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