Angel In Disguise

broken bags of water
grimacing skull
upside down
transfiguration
in the green
mountains
estranged ways of pathos
delusional escapade
tropical moon
confessing
in the dark intricate wilderness
of the death valley
red drapes of
memory
parting delicately
she is an angel in disguise
guarding the door
to the hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/18/2016 11:51:00 AM
Hello Francis, Praise your angel far and wide..... From her seekers her face do not hide... excellent! Did you finish your book?
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Francis Osho
Date: 5/13/2016 7:00:00 PM
sorry pashang. i didnt see this before. yeh it is 92 poems with abstract sketches. too many sketches they might say. but did is a new kind of art. book title"dogs of saambalpoor". am lazy, u know most creators r.will send d book to d publisher today. ur note seems like a sign ty
Date: 3/7/2016 3:00:00 PM
Dear Francis I'm flattered first of all, but their are others more talented then myself, still thank you, love this piece for it's dark energy, love the mystery in the imagery just perfectly expressed just enough darkness bravo young master Poe, cheri
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Francis Osho
Date: 3/7/2016 8:20:00 PM
ty cheri. there are many who can write poetry regurgitating from the past counting syllables and those sort.i look for originality in the work. even though your themes are little from the past.usually i cant finish reading a long poem but i read yours. that is cos of the originality.ur poems should be the most in best poems.you write their way a lot bot with great creativity
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