Angel Eyes Loving You Forever

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Author's Notes: This romantic Acrostic, entitled: "Angel Eyes Loving You Forever," is a co-authored by poem by Liam McDaid and me. It's our mutual take on the truly wonderful and passionate aspects that a man and a woman share in love and life together. (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, January 24, 2015) (Acrostic)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, romance, and spiritual.

Always a dream as the stars wink and smile Never ending beauty shines picture perfect Gifted when the moon smiles silver waves Endless pleasure in a breath of wind sweet Love blowing goodnight wishes to Heaven Everlasting happiness sings with such elation You bring joy when echoes fall silent smiling Eyes of emotions sparkle golden warm kisses Sweetly the sun kisses a new day with you Longing for your passionate caress everyday Oxygen needed to calm me down as we touch Vivacious you are My Sweet always on my mind In love always everyday with you my Dearest One Never ever wanting to leave your side at all Great things in abundance result from our love You are simply the most wonderful person to me Our love is a mutual bond that binds us together Unique signifies the nature of our love My Sweet First always you are in my heart and soul My Love Our love, desire, and passion are boundless always Ready always to take you in my arms Dearest One Ever precious you are as my true love and soulmate Very intent and passionate always when thinking of us Ever present we are now in each other’s life My Love Remembering the love we share forever always one Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 24, 2015) (Acrostic)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2015 3:51:00 AM

- There is one big gift in life: to love and be loved - Save all smiles and good times, there are millions of small seconds - It is love that puts the sun and the other stars in motion - A romantic and beautiful poem from you Liam and Gary !!!! - A hug makes a happy day happier and an impossible day possible - // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/28/2015 8:06:00 AM

so sweet anne lise yeah its the most precious gift that one can give wonderful comment dear pal bless you gary just melted this piece

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/27/2015 8:45:00 PM

Liam, what a sublime write. Can't get enough of the fact that the poem is a product of the pens of two men of deep sensitivity...How blessed are the loves of your lives. How fortunate we readers are! A 7 for me. Keep those collaborations coming. All the best... Kim :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/28/2015 7:57:00 AM

ah so sweet of you kim yeah we both have sensitive natures wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Meg Anderson

Date: 1/27/2015 7:36:00 PM

Beautiful!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/28/2015 7:49:00 AM

thank you meg for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/27/2015 5:38:00 PM

Hi Liam and Gary ! Another very beautiful and enchanting poem written by you my dearest friends. Awesome acrostic! love the title too!.smiling. Very dreamy and sweet! A very solid 7 +++ ++ for you guys ! A very romantic loving piece to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I really love and enjoy it! Your pens are mighty golden! Have a very lovely day! God bless you both! :) Love and hugs! XXOXXOXXOX D.^O^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/28/2015 7:48:00 AM

wonderful comment dorian thank you kindly garys pen melted this piece

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/27/2015 5:37:00 PM

Liam and Gary..So beautiful this is !!!Charma

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/28/2015 7:46:00 AM

thank you charmaine so kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear pal