Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  This romantic Acrostic, entitled:  "Angel Eyes Loving You Forever," is a co-authored by poem by Liam McDaid and me.  It's our mutual take on the truly wonderful and passionate aspects that a man and a woman share in love and life together.  (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, January 24, 2015) (Acrostic)

Categories:  allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, romance, and spiritual.

Angel Eyes Loving You Forever

Always a dream as the stars wink and smile
Never ending beauty shines picture perfect 
Gifted when the moon smiles silver waves
Endless pleasure in a breath of wind sweet 
Love blowing goodnight wishes to Heaven 

Everlasting happiness sings with such elation 
You bring joy when echoes fall silent smiling
Eyes of emotions sparkle golden warm kisses
Sweetly the sun kisses a new day with you 

Longing for your passionate caress everyday
Oxygen needed to calm me down as we touch
Vivacious you are My Sweet always on my mind
In love always everyday with you my Dearest One 
Never ever wanting to leave your side at all   
Great things in abundance result from our love

You are simply the most wonderful person to me 
Our love is a mutual bond that binds us together
Unique signifies the nature of our love My Sweet

First always you are in my heart and soul My Love
Our love, desire, and passion are boundless always 
Ready always to take you in my arms Dearest One
Ever precious you are as my true love and soulmate 
Very intent and passionate always when thinking of us
Ever present we are now in each other’s life My Love
Remembering the love we share forever always one

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 24, 2015) (Acrostic)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 3:51 AM
- There is one big gift in life: to love and be loved - Save all smiles and good times, there are millions of small seconds - It is love that puts the sun and the other stars in motion - A romantic and beautiful poem from you Liam and Gary !!!! - A hug makes a happy day happier and an impossible day possible - // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 8:06 AM
so sweet anne lise yeah its the most precious gift that one can give wonderful comment dear pal bless you gary just melted this piece
Nunez Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 8:45 PM
Liam, what a sublime write. Can't get enough of the fact that the poem is a product of the pens of two men of deep sensitivity...How blessed are the loves of your lives. How fortunate we readers are! A 7 for me. Keep those collaborations coming. All the best... Kim :)
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:57 AM
ah so sweet of you kim yeah we both have sensitive natures wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you
Anderson Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Beautiful!
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:49 AM
thank you meg for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Hi Liam and Gary ! Another very beautiful and enchanting poem written by you my dearest friends. Awesome acrostic! love the title too!.smiling. Very dreamy and sweet! A very solid 7 +++ ++ for you guys ! A very romantic loving piece to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I really love and enjoy it! Your pens are mighty golden! Have a very lovely day! God bless you both! :) Love and hugs! XXOXXOXXOX D.^O^
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:48 AM
wonderful comment dorian thank you kindly garys pen melted this piece
Chircop Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Liam and Gary..So beautiful this is !!!Charma
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:46 AM
thank you charmaine so kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear pal
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