Angel Eyes Loving You Forever

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Author's Notes: This romantic Acrostic, entitled: "Angel Eyes Loving You Forever," is a co-authored by poem by Liam McDaid and me. It's our mutual take on the truly wonderful and passionate aspects that a man and a woman share in love and life together. (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, January 24, 2015) (Acrostic)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, romance, and spiritual.

Angel Eyes Loving You Forever Always a dream as the stars wink and smile Never ending beauty shines picture perfect Gifted when the moon smiles silver waves Endless pleasure in a breath of wind sweet Love blowing goodnight wishes to Heaven Everlasting happiness sings with such elation You bring joy when echoes fall silent smiling Eyes of emotions sparkle golden warm kisses Sweetly the sun kisses a new day with you Longing for your passionate caress everyday Oxygen needed to calm me down as we touch Vivacious you are My Sweet always on my mind In love always everyday with you my Dearest One Never ever wanting to leave your side at all Great things in abundance result from our love You are simply the most wonderful person to me Our love is a mutual bond that binds us together Unique signifies the nature of our love My Sweet First always you are in my heart and soul My Love Our love, desire, and passion are boundless always Ready always to take you in my arms Dearest One Ever precious you are as my true love and soulmate Very intent and passionate always when thinking of us Ever present we are now in each other’s life My Love Remembering the love we share forever always one Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 24, 2015) (Acrostic)

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Kp Nunez

Date: 1/28/2015 6:48:00 PM

Gary, what a sublime write. Can't get enough of the fact that the poem is a product of the pens of two men of deep sensitivity...How blessed are the loves of your lives. How fortunate we readers are! A 7 for me. Keep those collaborations coming. All the best... Kim :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/31/2015 10:18:00 AM

Hello Kim, I'm glad you enjoyed this co-authored write very much. I know that Liam feels the same way. Thanks for the highest rating too. Most appreciated indeed!! Liam and I will be doing more co-writes for the future. All the best to you too for 2015!! Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/27/2015 5:28:00 PM

gary must say i just love how our pens melted in this smiling also everyone such a delight reading your wonderful comments heartfelt appreciated always a great pleasure writing with you pal

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/31/2015 10:20:00 AM

Liam Mate!! Yup the Leprechauns pitched in and gave us both a hand in melting our pens together for this particular co-write!! Great working with you always on our co-writes together!! Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/26/2015 4:01:00 PM

Beautifully passionate write...Angel eyes will, no doubt, love you forever, as well, for the poetry you write.

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/26/2015 4:18:00 PM

ML, Thanks so much!! You are always very kind and gracious with your reviews and comments. I appreciate it -- and I know Liam does too. (He may comment separately back to you.) Best Always, Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/26/2015 11:26:00 AM

I always say Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid is a deadly combination. Liam is a wonderful man and a divine poet.And you Gary broad-minded methodical and caring friend. I pray to God for both of your wellbeing and happiness.Angel Eyes Love You Forever. .My love to Ingrid too.Your friend Rajat

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/26/2015 3:47:00 PM

Rajat My Friend . . . Your praise is indeed very kind and gracious. I'm sure that Liam will be commenting to you shortly. I know that we both have the same prayers and wishes for you and your family too!! (I will be standing down from Poetry Soup during the month of February to complete the final work with my publisher on my upcoming book, which will be ready by May 2015. By early March I should be back online posting poems and commenting.) Best Always Rajat!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/24/2015 8:38:00 PM

Hello Gary and Liam ! Another very beautiful and enchanting poem written by you my dearest friends. Awesome acrostic! love the title too! Very dreamy and sweet! A very solid 7 +++ ++ for you guys ! A very romantic loving piece to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I really love and enjoy it! Your pens are mighty golden! Have a very lovely day! God bless you both! :) Love and hugs! XXOXXOXXOX D.^O^" "

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/25/2015 11:27:00 AM

Thanks "D"!! Liam my be commenting later separately on this co-write. I believe he will be posting it too by 26 January. Glad you enjoyed this Acrostic write and thanks for your most gracious words, comments, and support. Never forget that you write very exceptional poetry as well. Both Liam and I acknowledge that too very much so!! Thanks also for the Super Seven rating. I'm thankful and overwhelmed!! Best Always "D", Your Friend, Gary