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Angel Eyes

She would lean into the water blue, to witness angel eyes, She would bend down close, and whisper then, and pray to have a friend So close they were, yet, ...still they lived a thousand worlds apart Each day she came and there she was... An angel would transcend... She would lie beside the water cool, and gently touch the glass The woodland pool, where hydrangeas grew, with mosses wet from dew She had seen her in the pool before…. There was comfort in her silent ways, her flowing hair, her gentle grace And with understanding eyes Her heart would yearn, but she never learned This angel was unknown A friend she made, was close inside A face that was her own
_________________________________ Carrie Richards 10/22/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/15/2013 1:21:00 PM
Really nice
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Date: 11/12/2013 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Carrie
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:30:00 PM
Wow again! Still my fave, Carrie...Big congrats on your first place win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:05:00 PM
wow...i love your take on this topic Carrie... such a beautiful write! Congrats on your awesome win :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:34:00 PM
So cool she was her own angel! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/11/2013 4:59:00 PM
An angel inside and out....wonderful write! Big congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:20:00 PM
What a Beautiful touch and lovely twist you have given to 'Reflections' in this sweet fairy write. Thank you my friend for a sweet journey through your poetic skills which ended with a lovely twist and thank you for your kind precious words on my Poem. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:00:00 PM
Beautiful, you are a gift to all of us!
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:08:00 PM
beautiful write, Carrie. Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 10/26/2013 1:29:00 PM
Love this Carrie.Wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/25/2013 6:27:00 PM
Awwww, Carrie, soooo beautiful. We are our best friend, yes. If this is for the contest, a sure winner. Good luck, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 10/25/2013 12:00:00 PM
Angel eyes indeed...so beautiful Carrie....but they always are..pray to have a friend..such beautiful lines
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Date: 10/25/2013 7:35:00 AM
Ahhh!! I like the surprise ending..Enjoyed reading your contest entry this morning,,Thanks for the review of my work..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:34:00 PM
wonderful write...best wishes
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:31:00 PM
deep poem with such beauty . I hope to see it high on the list of the angel eye poems!!
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Date: 10/23/2013 4:13:00 PM
your post is deep Carrie. ... nice going. ..skat
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Date: 10/23/2013 3:03:00 AM
Dearest Carrie..When are you publishing your book dear.I really yearn for one on my shelf : ). So beautiful this is..Not enough words could express.
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Date: 10/23/2013 12:06:00 AM
Carrie, this poem is beautiful! It has first place written all over it and a fave for me! Love it!!:))
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