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Angel Battles For Me

A ngel Battles so I receive J oyous reception O pen handed welcome U are important R are and wonderful treatment N ervousness evaporated E veryone come here to get repaired Y es! You

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Date: 4/27/2011 12:28:00 PM
Hello Sara: Great poem. Thank U 4 taking the time 2 read and comment on my poem. Peace: Sheol
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:26:00 AM
Very nice , I really enjoyed your poem
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:54:00 AM
AHA an older one of yours I had missed! I like how you spelled out a Journey with your acrostic. What a journey it would be! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:30:00 PM
Hi Sara-- I hope you are feeling better by now-- that myelogram sounded painful but I believe in your strength :) praying for you as always-- nikko :)
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:42:00 PM
sad, thoughts run thru my mind,,Sara,, enjoyed,..p.d. *p.s.* I posted a poem dedication, hope you can spy your name in there. (IT IS IN THERE)Thanks for all your comments always p.d.
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Date: 11/12/2010 6:06:00 PM
were you drinking that night. john
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:53:00 AM
Well written, joyous acrostic:)
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Date: 11/11/2010 4:52:00 AM
Positive write... good messege my dear...luv Michael
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Date: 11/10/2010 1:51:00 PM
This kind of reminds me of a meditation or contemplation where one may find peace. Love, Dave
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:23:00 AM
Very deep, Sara" Love it ( Lin~RA )
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:16:00 AM
Sara, sorry to hear about the the trauma you had to go through. Hope you are feeling better today. Awesome write! God bless you ;)
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:47:00 AM
Sara, you should submit this to the "Let Us Pray" section of Sketchbook. Such a wonderfully uplifting prayer -- just what they are seeking for their next edition! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/10/2010 7:09:00 AM
You brought me back to you, dearest, for you have an excellent eye, and read well what I intended in "Poem". O your heart must be telescope of poetry, the your mind is a poem's canvas. May you be bless as we journey from this little room of time. One love
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Acrostic poem, Sara. Thank you for your kind words to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/9/2010 11:26:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Sara. Thank you for sharing it. Sorry you had to suffer so much dear friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:32:00 AM
I feel the shake in this write Sara ! Since I have experience with having a Mylegram, I can relate to this poem. I happened to be one of the "1%" of the patients who are allergic to the dye. "Oh, don't worry Mr. Peranteau, only one percent of patients have had an allergic reaction" ! I was one of those poor souls. For six weeks I had to have a nurse in my house around the clock ! God bless you dear poet ! much love, james
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:36:00 AM
reading your works is a joyful experience, well stated. stay out of the hospital, be well and please write more! chuck (your fan)
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:23:00 AM
Nice expression...sara...Everyone come here to get repaired..Nice Acrostic
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:35:00 AM
this is exceptional,sara.i like it.
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:49:00 AM
Hospital trip yesterday..I got the royal treatment except that mylegram was painful..The person doing it must have been right out of school and I was his first patient...He did not know what he was doing _like to have killed me..Sara
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