Angel Battles For Me

A  ngel Battles so I receive

J  oyous reception
O  pen handed welcome
U  are important
R  are and wonderful treatment
N  ervousness evaporated
E  veryone come here to get repaired
Y  es! You
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Moribund Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Hello Sara: Great poem. Thank U 4 taking the time 2 read and comment on my poem. Peace: Sheol
McBride  Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Very nice , I really enjoyed your poem
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 12:54 AM
AHA an older one of yours I had missed! I like how you spelled out a Journey with your acrostic. What a journey it would be! LUv, Andrea
K. Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:30 PM
Hi Sara-- I hope you are feeling better by now-- that myelogram sounded painful but I believe in your strength :) praying for you as always-- nikko :)
A   Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:42 PM
sad, thoughts run thru my mind,,Sara,, enjoyed,..p.d. *p.s.* I posted a poem dedication, hope you can spy your name in there. (IT IS IN THERE)Thanks for all your comments always p.d.
Loving Iii Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 6:06 PM
were you drinking that night. john
Harper Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Well written, joyous acrostic:)
Falotico Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Positive write... good messege my dear...luv Michael
Austin Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 1:51 PM
This kind of reminds me of a meditation or contemplation where one may find peace. Love, Dave
Ammutlinra Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Very deep, Sara" Love it ( Lin~RA )
Neels Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Sara, sorry to hear about the the trauma you had to go through. Hope you are feeling better today. Awesome write! God bless you ;)
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Sara, you should submit this to the "Let Us Pray" section of Sketchbook. Such a wonderfully uplifting prayer -- just what they are seeking for their next edition! Love, Carolyn
Shango Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 7:09 AM
You brought me back to you, dearest, for you have an excellent eye, and read well what I intended in "Poem". O your heart must be telescope of poetry, the your mind is a poem's canvas. May you be bless as we journey from this little room of time. One love
Villarosa Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 2:35 AM
I enjoyed reading your Acrostic poem, Sara. Thank you for your kind words to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Sara. Thank you for sharing it. Sorry you had to suffer so much dear friend. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2010 at 8:32 AM
I feel the shake in this write Sara ! Since I have experience with having a Mylegram, I can relate to this poem. I happened to be one of the "1%" of the patients who are allergic to the dye. "Oh, don't worry Mr. Peranteau, only one percent of patients have had an allergic reaction" ! I was one of those poor souls. For six weeks I had to have a nurse in my house around the clock ! God bless you dear poet ! much love, james
Keys Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 6:36 AM
reading your works is a joyful experience, well stated. stay out of the hospital, be well and please write more! chuck (your fan)
Mehta Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Nice expression...sara...Everyone come here to get repaired..Nice Acrostic
M V Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 5:35 AM
this is exceptional,sara.i like it.
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Hospital trip yesterday..I got the royal treatment except that mylegram was painful..The person doing it must have been right out of school and I was his first patient...He did not know what he was doing _like to have killed me..Sara
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