Angel At First Sight

the wind blows your hair
    as 
    the 
    air
    in
    the
 
       sky passes by, i 
    feel                lifted 
   off                       my 
  feet.                     i am
  like                 a feather
  tossed                 in air
   my                     life
     feels embraced by
 
                               your
                      presents
                  i feel
         no despair.
   your
  more
  then
  just
      an image
              of a beautiful soul.

  your a star that i see, the one
  in my    dreams.     i feel the
  light       shine           in my
  heart,     healing       the pain
  within     broken        pieces.
  as i        feel your      hand
  right       away           i could
  tell         that you       were
  my         sweet          angel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Montgomery Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Very Beautiful Devon :)
Loveless Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Wow, this is beautiful (: and the form is amazing. Keep writing, im interested to see what other things you can spin into shape with your words. xo .:Rain:.
Hallett Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:16 AM
How nice! good job!!! Keep writing!!! I can't wait to read more!!! And welcome to poetry soup!!! -Courtney-
Chebukina Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Welcome. I loved this poem. You told me you were bad at poetry. Looks like you lied. You are a talented person. Keep it up.=D Much Respect, Anna
Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:14 PM
this looks like a shape poem to me, and very interesting.
Taylor Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 9:15 PM
Hey Devon. You're too hard on yourself. This is excellent - well written unusual style. Very good. Keep 'em comin'! - Ralph Welcome to Soup.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. a nice setup for your form..enjoyed very much ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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