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Angel

her pink tiny palms,
bring heaven's touch in my heart,
   three months then she's gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:03 AM
This grips the heart with poignancy. Congratulations on having it featured Aiyah. Blessings, Connie
Marie Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 2:23 PM
...back to say Congratulations on being featured Aiyah! This is one of your poems that will always stay with me. ..i still get shivers at the heartbreaking beauty of your words. A fave, 7++++(i missed this last time :-)) many blessings to you, lynn
Kinch  Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Such a sad, moving senryu. Blessings x
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 3:30 PM
- Love & big hugs - // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats - brought tears to my eyes reading this again:-) hugs Jan xx
Marie Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 11:34 PM
This gave me shivers. The delicate touch of your pen is profoundly touching. bundles of blessings, lynn
Ainsley Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 9:25 PM
profound lovely
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 8:28 AM
- How are you, my angel ? :) - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Hi Aiyah, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Such a touching write my friend. Hugs....Mike. XX
Negron Flores Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations Aiyah
Leiser Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Congrats on your win Alyah :)
Callus Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Hi Aiyah! I commented on this lovely and touching poem yesterday, but there is no sign of my comment! It is a deserved winner...congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Sadly beautiful. I hesitate to say congratulations...
Devnath  Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Gupta Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Pathos and poignancy... Congrats...
Celestial Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Congratz Aiyah!
Scars Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:25 AM
oh my word Aiyah, I'm so sorry, this is sad but beautiful at the same time.congrats on your placement in the contest...:)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 7:26 AM
An emotional piece.... Congrats for your WIN in the contest.
Carmack Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 2:33 AM
I remember reading this when I saw it listed on the new poems page. This is a very touching poem Aiyah. Congrats on your placement.
A   Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Aiyah, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA
Muideen Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:03 AM
A very well penned. Bless........A.M.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 7:05 PM
oh my goodness ,this is so good. One of the best I have read on the angels. So sad. I love this.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:24 PM
- A huge hugs I am sending ..... touching beautiful, dear AiyaH :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Now, this has moved me. So sad yet a nice write. By the way, thanks for the comment, my kababayan. :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 10:44 AM
moving me with your golden pen, aiyah.. galeng!..huggs
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