Angel

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her pink tiny palms,
bring heaven's touch in my heart,
   three months then she's gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/7/2017 11:03:00 AM
This grips the heart with poignancy. Congratulations on having it featured Aiyah. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/12/2017 2:23:00 PM
...back to say Congratulations on being featured Aiyah! This is one of your poems that will always stay with me. ..i still get shivers at the heartbreaking beauty of your words. A fave, 7++++(i missed this last time :-)) many blessings to you, lynn
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:58:00 AM
Such a sad, moving senryu. Blessings x
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Date: 8/22/2016 3:30:00 PM
- Love & big hugs - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:25:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats - brought tears to my eyes reading this again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2016 11:34:00 PM
This gave me shivers. The delicate touch of your pen is profoundly touching. bundles of blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/1/2016 9:25:00 PM
profound lovely
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Date: 5/23/2016 8:28:00 AM
- How are you, my angel ? :) - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/15/2016 6:45:00 AM
Hi Aiyah, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Such a touching write my friend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/12/2016 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations Aiyah
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Date: 4/12/2016 5:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win Alyah :)
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Date: 4/12/2016 4:32:00 PM
Hi Aiyah! I commented on this lovely and touching poem yesterday, but there is no sign of my comment! It is a deserved winner...congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/12/2016 12:16:00 PM
Sadly beautiful. I hesitate to say congratulations...
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Date: 4/12/2016 11:03:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/12/2016 10:13:00 AM
Pathos and poignancy... Congrats...
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Date: 4/12/2016 8:49:00 AM
Congratz Aiyah!
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Date: 4/12/2016 8:25:00 AM
oh my word Aiyah, I'm so sorry, this is sad but beautiful at the same time.congrats on your placement in the contest...:)-luloo
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:26:00 AM
An emotional piece.... Congrats for your WIN in the contest.
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Date: 4/12/2016 2:33:00 AM
I remember reading this when I saw it listed on the new poems page. This is a very touching poem Aiyah. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 4/12/2016 12:57:00 AM
Aiyah, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:03:00 AM
A very well penned. Bless........A.M.
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Date: 4/8/2016 7:05:00 PM
oh my goodness ,this is so good. One of the best I have read on the angels. So sad. I love this.
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Date: 4/8/2016 12:24:00 PM
- A huge hugs I am sending ..... touching beautiful, dear AiyaH :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:44:00 AM
Now, this has moved me. So sad yet a nice write. By the way, thanks for the comment, my kababayan. :)
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Date: 4/5/2016 10:44:00 AM
moving me with your golden pen, aiyah.. galeng!..huggs
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