Angel

The sun shines bright on a dewy dawn
While birds sit and sing all morning long.

Flowers sprout from the ground below
Where my loved ones had to go.

While children laugh and play
I just want to get away.

As the day draws to an end 
We sit back with our friends.

Stars shining so brightly above
I know my angel is watching with love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 17, 2011 at 11:29 AM
I have a few angels watching me from above also Cory.. a lovely sensitive piece ..in Couplet form.. delightful and uplifting with wonderful visuals.. happy Sunday and thankxxx for your sweet comments...
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April 17, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Very nice, Cory. You may be describing a guardian angel, but some people view stars as holes in the seems of heaven through which our loved ones smile down upon us. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn
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April 17, 2011 at 3:35 AM
Very good flow, I liked this funny I just posted a poem called angel. a coincidence perhaps, Like the poem very much, and just because your new, doesn't matter to soupers, working on e-books for the poetry and have two books published and I'm in the poetrysoup.com bookstore on page #7 Food for thought poetry by Art Book #2, will become a premium member soon, and that is the way to go. Your a very good writer and keep the pen flowing, God bless.
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