Bonnie Morawa Poet I do not know?

Angel

Angel
   

"I  call him angel although not his name  he sat down besides me one crisp fall day
said to me " why do you cry"   i turned to look at with tears in my eyes i said" he hits
me i don,t know why"    he looked at me said " there is a better way "  he  dried my eyes and
carried me away   took me to safe place where he gave me courage, hope and faith
fed me a grilled cheese sandwich made straight from heaven  . three months later
he said " goodbye"   leaving me with courage, hope,and renewed faith in god.
 until the day we meet again  i say to him " your my and my friend".



                                                                                         
 by bonnie morawa
inspired by sean lugo

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John. M Diketane March 28, 2011 at 9:52 AM The purity and simplicity of ur poem is inspiring...

Carol Sunshine Brown March 28, 2011 at 4:33 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bonnie. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta March 27, 2011 at 6:05 PM Nice narrative expressions on angel, bonnie

A B March 27, 2011 at 5:58 PM I enjoyed reading this simple but sweet poem of yours. It sounds like there is lots of history behindd it. I would recommend fixing the grammatical and spelling errors. I believe that when you were writing this poem you were trying to convey and express your feelings, and I believe that you came very close to doing that. I would recommend also talking about your emotions when he talked to you and when you responded. I think taht you would like using words like "pastiche" and "unconditional"