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**The Thorn of a Bee**
*Written by Marilou G. Taupan*

In a peaceful meadow, a bee flies freely,
Small yet liberated and useful.
But no matter how good its deeds are,
There is something it fears—its “thorn.”

Like the bee, humans also have their own “thorns.”
It is not something that literally pierces others,
But it represents the experiences they carry—
The pain, anger, and wounds of the past
That have never fully healed.

Like the bee, a person may sometimes hurt others,
Not because it is their intention,
But because they only want to defend
And protect themselves.

When you see the true “thorn” within someone,
You will understand that it belongs to a person who has been hurt,
Someone who is trying their best
Not to be wounded again.

So, when you encounter someone with a “thorn,”
Do not immediately fear or turn away.
Perhaps that thorn is the very thing that keeps them strong
When the world has tried to break them.

Because behind every hidden thorn,
There is a story of pain, hope, and perseverance.
Like the bee—its thorn does not define who it is,
But the heart that continues to soar despite everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daniels Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 11:58 PM
Beautiful analogy, Marilou ! Poem is filled with wisdom and valuable reminders. I enjoyed this line : “ Perhaps that thorn is the very thing that keeps them strong When the world has tried to break them.” well done! Keep sharing your thoughts., Ghairo😊
Agustin Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup, aking Kababayan. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (I think it would be better if you use or highlight the English title as your posted entry.)
Smith  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Well expressed .
Taupan Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Thank you so much!
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