Andromeda-W

I used to teach A for Andromeda, a play
As back as in late sixties.
I desire to buy the star Andromeda
Of the Andromeda galaxy
From the cosmologist Fred Hoyle.
Let she be my ruling star
For my sweetie Charmer Iris.

Oh fair biological built Andromeda
Of short childhood and immortal youth
Quite Ignorant of all feelings
To teach you love they touched you softly
To teach you pain they pinched you.
My heavenly passions have flown
Yours is the blushing hours

I invoke you to rise early
And delay your departure.
Shine where my charmer Iris breathe
Shine on her flowers-scented path
Where gentle air winnows
Her silken tresses darkly flow.
And fall upon her brow so fair
Shine on Iris when she is here
And guide this pilgrim to her.

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Sixth Placement
Contest: Shining Star
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I taught A for Andromeda, a one-act play in late sixties.I have imagined Andromeda a star in 
the galaxy of the same name for my Charmer Iris. I am inspired right by the title Shining 
star.
The Milky Way's nearest neighbor in space is the spiral galaxy, Andromeda. It was first seen 
by the naked eye in 964 by a Persian astronomer, Abd Al-Rahman Al Sufi, who believed it to 
be a small cloud. It was first seen by a telescope in 1612 by Simon Marius.
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Brumley Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 3:50 AM
I too was fascinated by Andromeda as a young man. As is our own galaxy. They are engaged and will be wed long after the human race has destroyed itself. Hopefully it will be a successful union and the two black holes (The hearts of the galaxies) will join without destroying one another. Of course by that time I hope to be wearing my wings by then.
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 9:31 PM
Great job with this informative poem! Congratulations. Andrea
White Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Pretty cool Congrats Dr Ramm
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest DR. Love,Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 8:00 PM
Thanks Linda Marie for the compliments
Sweetheart Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my "Shining Star" contest.. excellent write and thankxxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie
Guzzi Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 7:25 AM
No humor in the verse Oh Dear What can the Matter be? only a man would think it's funny and it's sad to me kind sir you did........India is notorious for the mistreatment of girl children. Perhaps write us of that from a women's point of view for the contest. Loved the above verse you wrote as always intellegent and thought provoking. Light & Love
Murphy Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 9:12 AM
very nice write and thank you for all of your kind comments faleshia
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April 16, 2010 at 5:47 AM
What a thing to learn, I am always good on the stars. I just learned something right now. I have read of Simon M. Just not the year. I have never heard of the play. This has been a pleasure to read. Thank you also for the comment. P.D.
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 5:43 AM
Great educational write as well as a romantic piece...Keep the creative pen flowing...Good luck in the contest..Sara
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