Ghairo Daniels Poet Verse

Andromedan Castle : Orion Fort

Andromedan castles

moat has little blue boats

servers are maidens joyed

white iris gardens 

                        deep canyons

                        radars aimed

                        soft cadence

                        magnet minds

                        love balanced 


Orion forts marbled

shining with platinum bands

armoured Galactics cruel

stone and steel makes head reel

                           bold barons

                           orlon vests

                           high pylons

                           canon shots

                           warring sons
                            
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Paige Hind November 4, 2025 at 11:31 AM I do not know my history, but read Mickey's comment and yours to kind of understand what this was saying- I love the writing style!! Ghairo Daniels November 4, 2025 at 1:42 PM Yeah, it’s for humans who know which constellation God birthed their souls from. I tried a “pure” narrow pirouette with this, but couldn’t get rhymes, so turned it into plain verse.(improvisation, lol )

Mickey Grubb November 4, 2025 at 6:01 AM Hi Ghairo: Your piece seems to explore duality. Duality between love and war, softness and strength, intuition and force. Andromedan Castle: the realm of harmony and intuition; and, Orion Fort: the realm of power and conflict. A vivid clash of cosmic grace and martial grandeur for sure. An interesting/enjoyable read. Ghairo Daniels November 4, 2025 at 6:16 AM THANK-YOU mucho 4 visiting & comment, Mickey! Your insight is correct. In relation 2 Orion constellation, it has stark light /dark, so Souls originating from that constellation carry over their energy into Earth 2 be played out here. It has many “corridors” ie. souls struggling into light. They r here 2. Everywhere. On this site 2. Lol. Blessings.