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And White Picket Fence

we ride our white horse
young and in love, arms ‘round waist —
fairytale figures

1/21/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

January 22, 2021 at 1:15 PM

Delicate, fresh, delightful Kim!

Gershon Wolf

January 21, 2021 at 6:34 PM

Very lovely. Very, very sweet... As long as Aunt Polly doesn't make me paint that white picket fence!! ~ Tom Sawyer

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2021 at 8:14 PM

LOL! My daughter literally got a home with a white picket fence but not a fairytale ending...

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2021 at 12:42 PM

love this one. romance of the dreamer.

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Juliet Ligon

January 21, 2021 at 11:55 AM

Sounds like the perfection of fairytales. Love the double reference.

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Thank you :)

Tom Cunningham

January 21, 2021 at 11:18 AM

A fairytale image Kim, I can see the girl and her prince on horseback. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Thanks :)

Regina Mcintosh

January 21, 2021 at 4:55 AM

Love this. Gorgeous. God bless you

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2021 at 5:34 AM

God bless you too! Thank you!

Mystic Rose Rose

January 21, 2021 at 4:41 AM

Dear Kim, this is the beginning of a beautiful poem, I wish it were longer, but the imagination will have to take it there. Thanks Kim, have a wonderful day, full of promise.

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2021 at 5:34 AM

Thanks, Mystic Rose! When I have a bit more time!