And This Is How You Feel

I have been wondering all these years, 
Is it a smile or a mocking jeer.
Said you are special and will always be, 
Why don't u believe me, Oh dear! ! 

I have travelled a distance with pain and pleasures, 
held my love like a precious treasure.
Your care was my mental chores, 
and you say i don't make u feel greater! ! 

I sighed and doodle or stare into space; 
found nobody else except your face.
Poured my heart with your sterile words, 
and you think its all fake and grimace! ! 

How can i make u feel my love, 
cut my nerves or jump from above.
Hope that my care will someday count, 
before my flame burns out..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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