Asma Memon Poet Enclosed Rhyme

And They Went

They went in the lap of dreams
Blood! Blood! everywhere..
Cries are so loud; mourn itself is grieving 
Mothers are quiet; longing and holding their bellies 
 Blood! Blood! everywhere..
Humanity is dead; humans are dead
Flowers are dull; colors are fading
Blood! Blood! everywhere..
Stop this war; we demand peace 
You think its for the sake of religion?
Blood! Blood! everywhere..
Denunciate yourself; ask where you stand
You! yourself is a victim ferociousness
 Blood! Blood! everywhere..
And they went.. Innocence is brutality slayed
Blood! Blood! everywhere..

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Skat A August 1, 2015 at 1:15 PM Asma, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2015 at 4:34 PM you are welcome Sma

Richard Lamoureux April 26, 2015 at 9:26 AM I appreciate you entering my contest. Well expressed piece. Asma Memon April 27, 2015 at 10:47 AM Thanks Richard.

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2015 at 11:08 PM Asma, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA Asma Memon April 26, 2015 at 2:48 AM Thanks Linda

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thank you for the reply, Asma and thank you for sharing the reason why you wrote this poem..LINDA Asma Memon April 12, 2015 at 2:06 PM Thanks Linda.

Robert Lawrence April 6, 2015 at 6:22 PM Nice stuff, good pen. Asma Memon April 12, 2015 at 2:06 PM Thankyou Robert,

Phatt Matt April 5, 2015 at 11:54 PM WELCOME TO THE SOUP-MATT Asma Memon April 6, 2015 at 5:17 AM Thanks Matt

Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2015 at 9:35 PM Asma :) Congratulations!! <3 you are one of the poetry soups Top and Hottest Poet, -this month. I hope you enjoyed Your Easter Weekend PLUS, Your name on the featured page of the ~Best New Poet~ Enjoy the coming week. Love LINDA Asma Memon April 6, 2015 at 5:16 AM Thank you so much linda. I wrote this poem when i was deeply hurt by peshwar incident when innocent children were brutually killed. Few days back when i heard about Garissa univeristy incident it made me more disturbed that humanity is dying. Its blood blood everywhere. Im thankful to everyone for appreciation from you all and Poetrysoup.

Noel Villarosa April 2, 2015 at 12:23 AM There is a lot of wisdom in the old adage, "In war, there are no winners." It is time we called armistice to end this conflict. Thanks Asma. (^_^) Noel. Asma Memon April 2, 2015 at 2:15 PM Thanks Noel

Suburban Lovechild March 31, 2015 at 4:29 PM Blood occurs because misunderstanding negates humanity. We desperately need to do more to understand one another, but we're too often on our knees bowing to (or even blowing) those that reinforce our narrow sensibilities. Good write, very thought provoking. Asma Memon March 31, 2015 at 4:30 PM Thanks for your appreciation. Feel free to visit my web: www.xmmamemon.com

Kamran Rashid March 31, 2015 at 12:20 PM khoon kharaba--shoar sharabaa yu duniya hamarii ye duniya tumhari bhool hi baithay sab hai uparr ALLAH JUST PRAY FR ALL THR#love frm kashmir Asma Memon March 31, 2015 at 4:30 PM Thanks

Frederic Parker March 28, 2015 at 9:14 PM an angry poem about feeling helpless and questioning reason...a strong write..a lot of questions..no answers...interesting never the less Asma Memon March 29, 2015 at 6:41 AM Thanks for your appreciation. Feel free to visit my web: www.xmmamemon.com

Robert Lindley March 28, 2015 at 3:43 PM A7, GREAT WRITE.. Terrorism is just another manifestation of the ever present evil that exists in this world. There is no stopping it as it rests within the heart of man, a fallen creature.. Only one way to defeat it but most reject that way,Christ.. Great write, carry on.. Bravoooooo!!!!!!! Asma Memon March 28, 2015 at 3:45 PM Thankyou so much for you appreciation. Feel free to visit my web: www.xmmamemon.com

Su Ben March 26, 2015 at 12:13 PM The powerful write. I totally agree with you Azma, we shouldn't kill others for any reason, we saw enough of mothers' tears. Asma Memon March 26, 2015 at 12:23 PM Thanks Su Ben, Feel free to visit my web : www.xmmamemon.com I have arranged one poetry competition on facebook with prizeS. If you are interested do going. https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ Kind regards Asma

Isa Mahrie March 26, 2015 at 10:25 AM A deep expression end violence very well express love it... especially how it emphasis on blood blood everywhere ... love it ! Isa Asma Memon March 26, 2015 at 10:33 AM http://xmmamemon.com/index.php/xmma-blog/29-and-they-went Check this link too :) Asma Memon March 26, 2015 at 10:31 AM Thanks Isa, Feel free to visit my web : www.xmmamemon.com I have arranged one poetry competition on facebook with prizeS. If you are interested do going. https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ Kind regards,

Thomas Carney March 25, 2015 at 3:04 PM Good, but what are we talking about? Terrorism, war, or just every day life where people kill other people? Most folks on this earth are decent people, but there is evil, and we have to fight it. Thanks Thomas Asma Memon March 25, 2015 at 4:44 PM This one is specifically for terrorism. Kind regards, Asma

Anastasia Denny March 23, 2015 at 4:25 PM i love this Asma Memon March 23, 2015 at 4:26 PM Thanks. Feel free to visit my web. www.xmmamemon.com Asma Memon March 23, 2015 at 4:26 PM https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ If you want to take part in poetry competition join this event.

Asma Memon March 22, 2015 at 11:56 AM It's good Roger Horsch March 23, 2015 at 5:59 AM Hello Asma, Now this is a poem with a strong meaning. Very Good......Hugs To you.....Roger