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And She Felt Nothing

Hello empty, futile nothingness Our paths meet once again. Your black tunnel eyes bore into mine In you I see slate sky pouring rain. Forever running from this In unforgiving nothingness again. And good people’s eyes wash over me They never stop to take me in. I carry on, there’s nothing else In unforgiving nothingness again. I peel this onion once again Bleeding tears of acid rain. I find comfort in the welts of pain In unforgiving nothingness again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2011 6:10:00 AM
That's written from a very sad place, hope you are just good at empathising, if not I would just say that you have created something of beauty out of that sadness, enjoyed the read.
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