And It Stood Right Over There.

there once stood a man who in dungarees trained,
all his horses to run with his denim shirt stained.

There were fresh jars of liquor and bushels of wheat.
There was a cowbell that clanged:" Time! Come and eat!"

There once was a girl who rolled free in the hay.
Then she saw a packed loft on her wedding day.

There once soared a fire that brought cries of: " Help!"
There was a whipping out back of a brazen young whelp.

He once had a large family. They left him, one by one,
as the red barn was peeling in the long summer sun.

There once was a prize mare who had pictures and praise.
There once stood a red barn. It was here in those days

There still stand two stones, where this man and his wife
became one with the land to which they gave their life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/7/2010 6:31:00 PM
Couldn't see any newer ones of yours that I'd not yet viewed. Came back to this one. It is really nice! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:31:00 PM
I like how you related the history of a family's lives with that of the red barn. Best of luck in the contest and thanks for your sweet comments on my work these past few days. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:35:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this nostalgic barn write...I enjoyed reading your work this eve..Sara
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