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And I Have Landed

It vanished The chain To this heart of stone Just gone Slept for a time In your realm it seeks Not words nor touch But the silence of your romance And I am drawn Like a spirit with wings To a passion reaching out That calls my name And you of all Kings Haunted a Queen so far And to your Kingdom’s love I have found my landing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/25/2016 9:13:00 PM
Good use of metaphor. "And I am drawn like a spirit with wings to a passion reaching out that calls my name" loved this bit, here. Love is a bright a beautiful thing ... just don't let it zap you if you get too close ... lol.
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/13/2016 12:16:00 AM
hahahah thanks
Date: 2/18/2016 12:52:00 AM
Smoothly lovely.
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/18/2016 12:56:00 AM
Salam Abdullah, thank you :)
Date: 2/16/2016 8:53:00 AM
nicely done Sarah, really fine job!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/16/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thanks a lot Gordon! :)
Date: 2/16/2016 12:38:00 AM
Good job--very moving, Sarah. Janice
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/16/2016 5:41:00 AM
thanks Janice :)
Date: 2/15/2016 11:37:00 PM
This is almost spiritual in ts beauty Sarah. Divine! #7
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/15/2016 11:41:00 PM
Connie, you're a beauty...thank you very much :)
Date: 2/14/2016 10:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem of love and devotion exquisitely rendered! Well done Sarah! Best wishes, Keith
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/15/2016 12:51:00 AM
Hi Keith, thank you for your words. Best wishes dear
Date: 2/14/2016 10:37:00 PM
Very romantic and beautiful!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/15/2016 12:49:00 AM
thank you Arthur
Date: 2/13/2016 9:08:00 PM
What a peaceful love story, Sarah, I find your poetic pattern of introspective serenity towards love to be quite unique and beautiful, jim
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 2/13/2016 11:00:00 PM
thank you Jim, so nice of you to pass by :)

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