Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

And God Smiled In the Apple Orchard

Crisp apple fragrance
        cheers a ripe sunny morning ~
                Pippins nip the air

                          ~

            A family gathers
    under the autumn sunshine
          picking the bounty
   Ladders rest against the trunks
     A picnic waits under trees
                         ~

           Children giggle while
       russet leaves whirl merrily~
God's eyes are smiling
 






For "Harvest  of Happiness" Contest

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Line Gauthier April 16, 2018 at 8:55 PM Lovely, Carrie. One for the 'I do not know' form rather than haiku?

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2010 at 5:19 AM Congratulations Carrie on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2010 at 11:25 PM Great imagery and one of the entries truest to form. Congrats, Carrie!

Francine Roberts September 20, 2010 at 11:46 AM lovely imagery, congrats on your win with this beautiful poem

Doris Culverhouse September 19, 2010 at 2:52 PM beautiful picture you paint, well written, and congrats on the placement in the contest!!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2010 at 4:36 AM Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 19, 2010 at 12:40 AM Congrats Carrie on your success in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. a special write ... thankxxx for supporting my contests always with luv..

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2010 at 11:50 PM Gosh, I really like this, Carrie. Hey, do you have any chapbooks? I would just love having a collection of your best short works like these! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire September 12, 2010 at 3:52 PM Such a delightful poem with wonderful images that make the reader smile, Carrie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2010 at 7:55 PM nice one, enjoyed yoru write...P.D.

David Smalling September 11, 2010 at 6:26 PM Love it, a sweet bouquet of tender memory, an elegy to the bond of family ... awesomely beautiful, my friend