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And God Smiled In The Apple Orchard

Crisp apple fragrance cheers a ripe sunny morning ~ Pippins nip the air ~ A family gathers under the autumn sunshine picking the bounty Ladders rest against the trunks A picnic waits under trees ~ Children giggle while russet leaves whirl merrily~ God's eyes are smiling For "Harvest of Happiness" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 4/16/2018 8:55:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. One for the 'I do not know' form rather than haiku?
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:25:00 PM
Great imagery and one of the entries truest to form. Congrats, Carrie!
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:46:00 AM
lovely imagery, congrats on your win with this beautiful poem
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:52:00 PM
beautiful picture you paint, well written, and congrats on the placement in the contest!!
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Date: 9/19/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 9/19/2010 12:40:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your success in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. a special write ... thankxxx for supporting my contests always with luv..
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Date: 9/15/2010 11:50:00 PM
Gosh, I really like this, Carrie. Hey, do you have any chapbooks? I would just love having a collection of your best short works like these! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:52:00 PM
Such a delightful poem with wonderful images that make the reader smile, Carrie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2010 7:55:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed yoru write...P.D.
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Date: 9/11/2010 6:26:00 PM
Love it, a sweet bouquet of tender memory, an elegy to the bond of family ... awesomely beautiful, my friend
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