John Lawless Poet Rhyme

Ancient River Passing Song

Ancient river, passing song
always here forever gone
rippled by flirtatious winds
disappearing round its bends.

Crooked fingers drawing lines
tributaries, twisted tines
counting coup on drum roll stones
ancient rivers heading home.

John G. Lawless
©7/6/2022

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Mystic Rose Rose July 6, 2022 at 3:13 PM Your poem has a rhythm and heart beat, that I like, enjoyed reading your words, take care, Blessings and Joy

Susan Woodrow July 6, 2022 at 9:36 AM Love this :) John Lawless July 6, 2022 at 2:17 PM Good to hear from you Susan, thanks

Patrick Kelly July 6, 2022 at 6:11 AM Wow, a fast, easy read. Reminds me of a river near me. Thanks. John Lawless July 6, 2022 at 2:17 PM Thanks for stopping to read and comment Patrick.