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Ancient River Passing Song

Ancient river, passing song always here forever gone rippled by flirtatious winds disappearing round its bends. Crooked fingers drawing lines tributaries, twisted tines counting coup on drum roll stones ancient rivers heading home. John G. Lawless ©7/6/2022

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Date: 7/6/2022 3:13:00 PM
Your poem has a rhythm and heart beat, that I like, enjoyed reading your words, take care, Blessings and Joy
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Date: 7/6/2022 9:36:00 AM
Love this :)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2022 2:17:00 PM
Good to hear from you Susan, thanks
Date: 7/6/2022 6:11:00 AM
Wow, a fast, easy read. Reminds me of a river near me. Thanks.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2022 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment Patrick.

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