Ancient Nile

fertile currents flood
parched fields regenerated
goods flow to market
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 10:52 PM
I really like how you associated flow of flood with flow of market!
Horsman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:21 AM
A very profound poem, also very 'matter of fact' awesome. Harry
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