Ancient Edifice

Ancient big building
One look at thousand of years
Red wall, white snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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December 27, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Enjoyed your poem, in reading, I couldn't help but focus and the last line and it saddened my heart, for in this restless world today I see- white walls and red snow.
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December 27, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Thank you for delving the meaning of this haiku poem. Though it change in your word placement, I got you. Thank you for your nice comment. I really appreciate it very much.
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