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Ancient cistern full

Huge worn stone lid removed --- dragged to one side - centuries ago, and not moved since --- nestled in grassy pasture land; cistern filled - w/ cool rippling water - brilliant and overflowing: big open sky above, azure, brighter, deepest: one last dark cloud dejectedly drifts away.

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Date: 10/15/2020 4:43:00 AM
Interesting imagery in this poem, with a change feeling to it..
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Gary Onderisin
Date: 10/15/2020 4:50:00 AM
thanks very much for the feedback, Silent One. best wishes, gary