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The old Barlett Pear Trees have been loaded this year..Their fruit plentiful..I am no longer able to perserve them as I once did...

Ancient Barlett Pear

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                                                Ancient Barlett Pear
                                    Orange leaves dance reflect light...
                                           Lone pear splats 'on earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 2:59 PM
I think the other one reads better!
Sivey Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Can I eat one of those pears? They mean so much...thanks for sharing this poem, It meant a lot to me! Great work!
Austin Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Sympathy. I asked the doctor whether I should be concerned about prostate. He said, "Mr. Austin, if prostate hasn't gotten to you by your age - 82 - don't worry about prostate. Something else will get you." I said, "Oh, thanks a lot, Doc." Love, daver
Lane Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 12:28 PM
At our house those pears are know as the ones that Tony will eat.
Horne Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 11:12 AM
I can visualise this perfectly - the little apples on our trees are all over the ground now too, and covered in funny spots.
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 10:55 AM
The pear trees can live a long time if they are pruned each winter to allow for new growth. The last line is so sad, Sara. What a shame these wonderful fruit trees can't produce year-round. Enjoyed your haiku! Love, Carolyn
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