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calm water rock skipping mist rising

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 10/10/2012 1:02:00 AM
It's amazing the strong imagery brought out by these few words. Now that's what I call good poetry!
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Date: 9/29/2012 2:58:00 PM
You recreated a scene from my childhood many long years ago! Great imagery, Jack
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Date: 9/25/2012 8:21:00 PM
Beautiful rendering! A new form of Haiku? Cynthia
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:38:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..I can just see the scene..Sara
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:24:00 PM
9 sylls and so much imagery, like this
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