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Ancestral Seeds

ancestral seeds grow as family tree ripens... bearing fruits of love Haiku on My Family Contest Sponsor: Marvin Celestial 5/10/2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2016 6:47:00 AM

Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/14/2016 3:24:00 PM

This is one of the best entries in the contest, Nette, considering it has to be a haiku. I have seen several 3 liners, but that does not mean they are haiku! ~ Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2016 4:46:00 PM

Ahh!! Very crative work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Lu Loo

Date: 5/10/2016 9:53:00 AM

Nette, this is a beautiful senyru, you carry a true gift lady! :)-luloo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/10/2016 8:08:00 AM

Delightfully creative dear, nette! A seven!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/10/2016 7:55:00 AM

May your family tree become a Forrest!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/10/2016 7:44:00 AM

wow this is so profound,love it.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/10/2016 7:19:00 AM

delightful Nette.