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Anatomy of Melancholy

Loneliness, like a sickle that rips the soul to the bone One that makes you feel you are alone A feeling of utter desolation One that kills the hope in your emotion Desperation, like a rope that strangles your will to exist In tearing sadness, it's hard to resist Like a drowse of enchanted magic potion That fashions a mortal illusion Desolation, a state of intense hopelessness A painful feeling of drastic emptiness Like a creeping soul in the gloom That lost all its chances to bloom Emptiness, a feeling of complete depravity That savagely severs your ties to reality A state of bleak disposition That tears down the heart of your volition May 7, 2023 Anatomy of Melancholy Poetry Contest (10th place) Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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Date: 5/15/2023 6:34:00 AM
Like a hammer to a nail: loneliness, desperation, desolation, emptiness! A severance of one’s ties to reality. Congratulations, Roger!
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Roger Roger
Date: 5/15/2023 1:42:00 PM
Thank you very much dear...
Date: 5/6/2023 6:43:00 PM
This poem does capture the essence of loneliness, which I know to be very painful. Well done, and best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/6/2023 6:53:00 PM
Thank you very much... Writing based on experience...

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