Gershon Wolf Poet Nonet

Anatomy of a Race

Bursting forward, straight line to the top
Laser-focus cannot be stopped
All obstacles plowed under
Jet-like speed a wonder
Finish line is seen
On the big screen
The tape's torn
The race ~ 
Won!

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Kim Rodrigues September 12, 2021 at 4:51 AM And then a zillion cheers! From me too :) Gershon Wolf September 12, 2021 at 4:58 PM I'll make it a zillion and one...

L Milton Hankins September 11, 2021 at 9:27 PM Outstanding, Gershon. You took me right to the finish line! Good one!!!! Gershon Wolf September 12, 2021 at 4:59 PM OK. Good. Now it's time take the tape off of your chest. lol. Thanks.

Tom Cunningham September 11, 2021 at 8:26 PM You captured the nail biting finish well Gershon. Tom Gershon Wolf September 11, 2021 at 8:30 PM Thank you, kind sir. Cheers, gw