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Anatomy of a Race

Bursting forward, straight line to the top Laser-focus cannot be stopped All obstacles plowed under Jet-like speed a wonder Finish line is seen On the big screen The tape's torn The race ~ Won!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/12/2021 4:51:00 AM
And then a zillion cheers! From me too :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2021 4:58:00 PM
I'll make it a zillion and one...
Date: 9/11/2021 9:27:00 PM
Outstanding, Gershon. You took me right to the finish line! Good one!!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2021 4:59:00 PM
OK. Good. Now it's time take the tape off of your chest. lol. Thanks.
Date: 9/11/2021 8:26:00 PM
You captured the nail biting finish well Gershon. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2021 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, kind sir. Cheers, gw

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