Anatomical Complaints of a Lover

My eyes you conquered with the might of Alexander,
Puru I gladly became at that thunder.

My heart a plaything became at your hands,
Unconditionally surrendered I time thousands.

My lungs hyperactive emerged at your sight,
Panted I with delightful fright.

When you approached, my feet terribly trembled,
From limb-mind configuration, courage I assembled.

Your presence made me feel neuron-quake in my head
Producing dew-drops of perspiration in the forehead.

Sharp-tongued am I with the gift of the gab,
Alas! Your sovereign presence rendered me drab.

In my constitution, you caused an adrenaline rush
I think, I trod the path where angels fear to rush.

You took a toll on my veins and blood,
By making the red humour flow in streams of flood.

In Geography on chapter Egypt, you made my attention cursory,
Elective Maths became real elective, making you compulsory.

You made me forsake the empire in me and the books,
To be the Columbus of the empire within fine frame yours?

You made the atoms of my physique
Pathologically you-sick.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/2/2010 1:12:00 PM
I've never been frightened of monsters or tentacles under my bed. Not skeletons, witches or goblins or creatures come back from the dead!
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:18:00 PM
I love this .. it is full of wit and imagination. Welcome to poetrysoup, drop by anytime, my friend.
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Date: 9/2/2010 11:41:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight... the soup has many contests posted.. check them out and enter... and good luck...with luv..
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