Get Your Premium Membership

Anathomy of Melancholy

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sotto Poet.


When I'm by myself and free to muse, But I am reluctant to leave the dark views. when I'm crafting virtual castles in the air. without sadness and without fear. Soothing my mind with fantasies is sweet. I feel that time is truly tight and feat. All my delights in this are folly. Nothing tastes as dear as melancholy. When I was waking up alone, Recalling whatever I've done Tyrannise, my ideas almost you Fear and grief struck me through Whether I stay or whether I go The pace of time seems to be real slow. All my sorrows around this are jolly. Nothing is as insane as melancholy. disappearing in a smooth way. The hope of tomorrow is gone today. Lay an effort to entice him to stay. even when he went astray. Life is similar to molding clay. Hearth hardened, put on display. Memories are all over, alike a token. The mountain of lies, I've spoken The wounds were ripped open. Regrettably, one had chosen It wrecked each day with a fancy notion. And yet she flees the world, broken. Written: May 09, 2023 Anatomy Of Melancholy Poetry Contest Sponsored by: craig cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/10/2023 4:32:00 AM
Emotions dwelling in this write my friend----giving voice to inner conflict.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/9/2023 4:55:00 PM
melancholy don't last, a new morning can change the face of troubles or people, i think we can manage melancholy, a very inspiring poem, thanks
Login to Reply
Date: 5/9/2023 11:55:00 AM
Gosh Sotto, your words are so deep they spring tears to my eyes. I am feeling a bit of the same today, melancholy. Life is real though, and penning it, wow, others can relate. Great poem. Hope you are well my friend, back from my poetry hiatus which I generally take while hosting my contests. Missed your poems, and so good to read your words again!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things