Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Dizain

Anath, the Warrior Goddess

I am Anath, the warrior goddess
With rippling sand and sinuating curves
Not a lady, but a woman lawless
No merciful but set to test your nerves
My lips are dry, can’t cry so always starve
If ready, I bloom in the dark of night
Come into me at sunset without fright
Stand with me and feel my serenity
Look out with me, feel how my depth incite
Will show secret spots of eternity.

* Anath is the name of a warrior goddess in Egyptian Mythology married to  Seth, the God of Deserts and Storms.*

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September 16, 2014
Form : Dizain ( AB AB BC CD CD-Ten Lines)
Dr. Ram Mehta
Fifth Place Win
Contest: In the desert by nette onclaud

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Skat A May 27, 2015 at 4:56 AM Amazing write

Debbie Guzzi September 22, 2014 at 3:46 PM Egyptian myths are fascinating. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Casarah Nance September 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM I love it! your poems are always unique and educated, such a pleasure to read! :) grats on your win.

Jan Allison September 21, 2014 at 3:51 PM unique take on the theme Dr Mehta many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2014 at 12:30 PM - Truly a lovely winning poem, Dr. Ram ! - Congrats with the 5th place - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley September 21, 2014 at 10:39 AM A unique take, fine write and great win ! Congrats on your win....

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2014 at 1:59 AM YOu did a marvelous job with this challenge. BIG congrats on a worthy win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2014 at 12:35 AM Congrats on big win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2014 at 12:35 AM Wow Dr Ram u amaze with this lovely new form n a mesmerising poem!

Mark Trichet September 20, 2014 at 9:01 PM Ahh Dr. you never cease to amaze me with your poetic style. Clap, clap, clap...

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2014 at 3:16 PM mythical allusions make this piece simply fascinating, dr.ram... lovely tone!.. proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans September 20, 2014 at 11:35 AM I think your take on this contest is fantastic Dr. Mehta. I love the way you speak for her. Congratulations on your win

Earl Schumacker September 20, 2014 at 11:05 AM Good morning Dr. Mehta, Your dizain has a nice design, structure and compelling story. Good job. Congratulations on a strong win. Earl

David Mohn September 20, 2014 at 8:48 AM congrast on your win Dr.Ram...very unique and nicely written

Kayod5 Kayode September 20, 2014 at 7:18 AM Congrats Dr. on the win,no doubt this stands out.

Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2014 at 9:46 AM I must try this form, you have enticed my creativity. Great piece Dr. Ram.

Carrie Richards September 16, 2014 at 8:47 PM What a unique way to write a poem of the desert......how can this one not be a top winner? Love it! ......ps.....I must take this chance, Dr. Ram, to thank you for your generosity and kindness to my own efforts ! So appreciate your comments and contests! :) Thank you!

Maurice Yvonne September 16, 2014 at 2:01 PM Sorry I didn't even realize you were not on my list of fav poets. I just added you because you are definitely one of my favs. I only recently remembered you could list your favorite poets.

Maurice Yvonne September 16, 2014 at 1:58 PM This is a marvellous write Dr. Ram. A delight to read. thank you to for the information on the poem that i found educational.