Gordon Mcconnell Poet Rhyme

An Upward Effect

Looking at the sun
above the blue sky
brings heat to our face
from away up high

This an amazing thing
indeed how can it be?
something so marvellous
happens to little old me

But always remember
the sun will end
one day in the future
only darkness will descend

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Mahtab Bangalee January 21, 2024 at 10:52 PM A humble heart can conquer everything~ nice to read you Gordon Mcconnell January 22, 2024 at 2:06 PM Thanks Mahtab,, Glad you enjoyed this piece and pleased you liked it. Blessings,Gordon

Joann Grisetti September 24, 2012 at 10:18 AM At least not in my lifetime. Great poem, just what I like to read. Gordon Mcconnell September 24, 2012 at 2:46 PM Hi Joann, thanks for comment, trust you're good and have blessed day. take care. Gordon

Poet Destroyer A September 24, 2012 at 8:37 AM lovely ending it's power will one day be at it's end, enjoyed your write,...p.d. Gordon Mcconnell September 24, 2012 at 9:37 AM HI PD, THanks for comment, really good blog page you've got, keep up good work. Have a blessed day, Gordon

Debbie Guzzi September 23, 2012 at 6:40 PM Super nova Light & Love