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An Unknown Angel

A mushy voice had left me insensate… My soul grinned & hallowed my fate… That “Belle” rambled close to me with elegance… As if she comprehended riddle of my deep Sense… Words from her rose lips felt like paradise… It made the fondness for her in my heart rise… Like a minor she laughs and roves for all to sight… Becomes an astounding moment like sun bright… While portraying her stunning beauty, I have inadequate utterance… Seeing that each imperfect expression for her beauty would be an offence...

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Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 11/21/2015 11:24:00 AM

Seeing that each imperfect expression for her beauty would be an offence.....sweet line :) Congrats :)

Mr Gautam
Date: 11/21/2015 12:07:00 PM

Thanks a lot. ^^

Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 10:27:00 PM

Gautam, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Mr Gautam
Date: 11/17/2015 10:28:00 PM

Thanks a Lot !! :) It feels great. ^^

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/28/2015 11:11:00 PM

Very nice lover boy, very nice

Mr Gautam
Date: 10/28/2015 11:13:00 PM

Haha....thanks a lot^^.

Skat A

Date: 10/26/2015 4:14:00 PM

Gautam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mr Gautam
Date: 10/26/2015 8:49:00 PM

Hey its pleasure meeting you all....I am glad to find such an amazing community....where i could express my emotions through poems. Looking forward to read your poems. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2015 1:31:00 AM

Gautam, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/26/2015 2:02:00 AM

Hi Gautam, thank you for the kind reply. Looking forward in reading more of your writes, like this. Romantic and deep.... LINDA

Mr Gautam
Date: 10/26/2015 1:34:00 AM

Thanks a lot Linda...your kind words mean a lot to me.^^