Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

An Uninvited Guest

Sorrow falls through weary walls-
As uninvited feelings mix...
When Complication comes to call
(Brings with it Woe that can't be fixed!)
I will strain to entertain
What Fate the Gods bestow
For I cannot live without the pain
That's buried deep within my Soul

*Heart and Soul Contest Entry

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Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 4:19 PM Hi Chan, WOW! That's real deep, and how you fell permanently. . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA Just That Archaic Poet March 20, 2014 at 9:44 AM Thanks, hon. Much appreciated as always :)

Nette Onclaud March 19, 2014 at 10:14 AM as soulful as it can get, chan.. my sweet on your greeat win... huggs! Just That Archaic Poet March 19, 2014 at 10:48 AM Awwww, shucks, Nette; now I'm blushing lol. Thanks so much, hon <3 :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 19, 2014 at 1:29 AM Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, JTAP Just That Archaic Poet March 19, 2014 at 7:08 AM Thanks so much, Doc! :)

Skat A March 18, 2014 at 10:14 PM Hi Chan, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~ Just That Archaic Poet March 19, 2014 at 7:09 AM I appreciate it so much, Skat; thank you :)

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2013 at 4:41 AM Congrats on the win , JTAP Just That Archaic Poet November 9, 2013 at 5:34 AM Thanks as always, Doc! :)

Skat A November 8, 2013 at 9:01 PM JTAP, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~ Just That Archaic Poet November 9, 2013 at 5:34 AM Thanks for hosting and letting me know, SKAT :)

Robin Davis September 26, 2013 at 8:04 AM Archaic, this is a powerful write. Full of feeling and depth. You allow the reader to really feel the pain buried inside. nice job Just That Archaic Poet September 26, 2013 at 8:24 AM That's a lovely thing for you to say, Robin; I appreciate it so very much. Thank you for your read and review! :)

Kelly Deschler September 12, 2013 at 12:33 PM "I cannot live without the pain, That's buried deep within my soul", I know what that feels like! Awesome line! Great flow to your words here, and I love the rhymes, too! Just That Archaic Poet September 12, 2013 at 4:17 PM Thank you so very much, truly. Your review makes me terribly happy :)

Karen Anglesey September 11, 2013 at 7:44 PM You're the master of poetic substance. When your poetry is on the page there is nothing else in the room. In awe :) Just That Archaic Poet September 12, 2013 at 9:35 AM Thanks, hon. I actually made a goof in the last line when you first read it and didn't catch it until I reread it. Last line should have said, "That's buried deep within my Soul". When you read it, it read "buried deep with my Soul" and I was like, Oh, no! lol