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An Uninvited Guest

Sorrow falls through weary walls- As uninvited feelings mix... When Complication comes to call (Brings with it Woe that can't be fixed!) I will strain to entertain What Fate the Gods bestow For I cannot live without the pain That's buried deep within my Soul *Heart and Soul Contest Entry

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 4:19:00 PM

Hi Chan, WOW! That's real deep, and how you fell permanently. . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/20/2014 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, hon. Much appreciated as always :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/19/2014 10:14:00 AM

as soulful as it can get, chan.. my sweet on your greeat win... huggs!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/19/2014 10:48:00 AM

Awwww, shucks, Nette; now I'm blushing lol. Thanks so much, hon <3 :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2014 1:29:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, JTAP

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/19/2014 7:08:00 AM

Thanks so much, Doc! :)

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2014 10:14:00 PM

Hi Chan, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/19/2014 7:09:00 AM

I appreciate it so much, Skat; thank you :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/9/2013 4:41:00 AM

Congrats on the win , JTAP

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:34:00 AM

Thanks as always, Doc! :)

Skat A

Date: 11/8/2013 9:01:00 PM

JTAP, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:34:00 AM

Thanks for hosting and letting me know, SKAT :)

Robin Davis

Date: 9/26/2013 8:04:00 AM

Archaic, this is a powerful write. Full of feeling and depth. You allow the reader to really feel the pain buried inside. nice job

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/26/2013 8:24:00 AM

That's a lovely thing for you to say, Robin; I appreciate it so very much. Thank you for your read and review! :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/12/2013 12:33:00 PM

"I cannot live without the pain, That's buried deep within my soul", I know what that feels like! Awesome line! Great flow to your words here, and I love the rhymes, too!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 4:17:00 PM

Thank you so very much, truly. Your review makes me terribly happy :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/11/2013 7:44:00 PM

You're the master of poetic substance. When your poetry is on the page there is nothing else in the room. In awe :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 9:35:00 AM

Thanks, hon. I actually made a goof in the last line when you first read it and didn't catch it until I reread it. Last line should have said, "That's buried deep within my Soul". When you read it, it read "buried deep with my Soul" and I was like, Oh, no! lol